Reviews for Under the Guise of Innocence
PartKneazle chapter 30 . 6/28
This is an amazing story. I hope that you eventually come back to finish it
Guest chapter 2 . 6/24
Lol my dad would kill me for spending that much money on clothes!
Erica18 chapter 30 . 5/16
Continue por favor.
Carryon chapter 30 . 5/15
Damn, LOVE this story! But no new chapter..
Dragon Whistler chapter 30 . 4/7
Oooo I like this pairing. Lovely story with a bit of dark theme running through it. Jasper is soooooo hot. Goddess to his God of WarI totally agree. Hermione is badass! Any chance you might continue this story? I hope you do one day finish this story.
Gryffindor Girl chapter 29 . 3/28
I love love LOVE this fan fic. The only thing i dont love is that Edward and Alice didnt like Hermione and hated her that strongly. If they didnt like her at first thats ok, or even just the way you wrote it. But i didnt love that jasper killed them. No hate here at ALL. I just want to be sure you know that i love this story and i love your writing. Honestly, i wouldnt be surprised if when you get older you become an author. Lots of love.
-Gryffindor Girl
Flower power 11 chapter 30 . 3/28
I love how we see a different side, a sadistic side, of Hermione and Jasper. I wonder how Carlisle, Esme, Emmett, and Rosalie will take it. I hope they feel disgusted with Edward and Alice.
Always-Pottermore chapter 30 . 3/9
What there was of this was great and I’m sad it was never finished. Definitely worth the read.
KatnissForever17 chapter 30 . 3/7
Hey,
I totally love your story. I have read it so many times. I really wish you would update it. I understand that life gets busy and chaotic.
Rebecca Crouch chapter 30 . 2/20
whew that was hot. thoroughly enjoying this story. love the jasper and Hermione pairing. I do hope you continue weigh this story as well. very well written so far. so well written that I stayed up till 2am to finish all that you've posted
Perseus101 chapter 1 . 2/13
I LOVE the fact that you included a photo of Draco being punched to add humour!
Tee Hill chapter 30 . 1/13
great chapter
Tee Hill chapter 29 . 1/13
Nice
Tee Hill chapter 28 . 1/13
Edward is an ass
Tee Hill chapter 13 . 1/13
LMAO
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