Great, now he's a coward too. Can't stop the fight himself so he has to beg other people to do for him. Dean is pathetic. Seriously one of the worst portrayals I've ever seen. You needed the wife to speak up, reveal that she knows english. That's the only fcken reason Dean didn't do what every reader knows he should've. You're a lazy fcker and this story you wrote is a monumental waste of everyone's time. You were too afraid to change anything and settled for changing nothing. You ain't a writer, not even a poor one. You're just a dude with too much time on his hands playing and pausing episodes to copy their work.

If anybody is reading reviews before trying the story just skip this garbage and watch Lost directly. This lazy fcker didn't actually bother writing a story, he just copy pasted the script to each episode word for fcken word and added a chatty backseat driver. Dean has plenty to say but his impact on the events of the story is fck all. 16 chapters in and this writer hasn't changed one thing about the canon story. Not one fcking thing is different and he's written a garbage Dean. You won't recognize him at all and it's not like his precence helped develop any of the characters. So if you think at the very least you might get that then think again. There isn't a single reason why you should read this story.

Delete this story you lazy b*stard! You wasted a couple hours of my time and everyone else's too. This isn't worth sticking around for, much less giving a try.

More awesome commentary on Deans part. Now if only it'd do anything...

You're such a lazy writer.

Cool. Dean's still being useless.. You could've at least taken the opportunity presented for Dean to start bringing home the food. And if you want to talk about useless people then wtf has Dean done? Loot and move some bodies? Get shot, cry for help and run back to camp? It's not like you've done Dean ANY favors so maybe he should shut his mouth about people being unhelpful. All he's been so far is all bark and no bite.

Again, you really should've used this opportunity to have your main character do something. Anything.

Good. Now it's up to whether or not he can follow through. That'll decide whether or not this is worth reading or if I should just go watch the show again directly. I'm not sure I can read too many more of these chapters without something changing.

Ohhh, what a big shot. He ran off to bring Sawyer on HIS own little jaunt but somehow ended up right back under Jack's leadership. How impressive! I'm really getting some bad*ss Dean vibes with this :)

I hope the sarcasm is obvious. Dean is totally Jacks b*tch.

Oh ffs. If ever there was a time to bring out the real Dean this was it. You really can't help but make this the most shallow crossover possible, can you?

See, that line right there is the problem! "What none of us could step up and do". That line shouldn't and doesn't apply to anybody even remotely resembling season 1-6 Dean. You've reeeeeeaally struggled to keep Dean consistent, but ffs don't rub our faces in it. I'm sick enough as it is seeing Dean reclining on the sidelines never getting the ball headed in a direction he wants it to go. Just nerf the canon already and start writing this story like Deans presence is shaking things up. Stop using it as a crutch and Dean as a useless third wheel. Otherwise what was the point of doing the crossover?

Dean is seriously out of character. He's from around the first season right? If so then that makes this doubly problematic. Maybe later when he was more worn down he might sit back, but not season 1 Dean. We've SEEN him take control of groups to get them through difficult situations. Why the fck isn't he doing that now? I know Jacks "supposed" to be the leader, but that's only in the canon. That excuse doesn't fly with a crossover introducing brand new characters. Dean should throw a wrench into that status quo. I'm getting really frustrated seeing him acting like a normal survivor, differing to some Doc for no reason. It's off.

It's poor storytelling when you have to rely on the convenience of Dean not asserting himself to force Jack back into a leadership position. You flat out just got Dean wrong.

I kinda thought Dean would do it. Seriously, why didn't Dean do it? I can imagine he'd feel pretty sure the Doc wouldn't be up for it.

That's it? No demon revealing where Dean and Sam were? I was hoping to see John's reaction!

Oh well, loved the story! I am absolutely glad to have read this story as my first introduction into the Lost/Supernatural crossover archive! :D

Now onto that sequel! :D

Loved the chapter!
I love that Dean realized that the Others are after Walt, if only there was a way for them to warn the people on the raft!

And I just realized that Dean won't be getting captured along with Jin, Sawyer, and Michael, because he wasn't on the raft. I can only hope that the three will recognise Sam's name enough to realise that he's Dean's brother! :D

And now for the final chapter and then heading straight for the sequel! :D

Loved the chapter!
I should have seen this coming. With Locke's talk of faith, of course Dean will dislike the man for that. I can only hope that Dean goes back to liking Locke. :')

And I'm shock that the story is about to end, and with no Sam and Dean reunion! D:

Loved the chapter!
I hope Dean doesn't hurt Locke! But I have to agree that Locke was foolish when he lied to Jack about what happened. Poor Boone! D:

Loved the chapter!
The phone number John Winchester gave was the same Lost numbers! Haha, that's awesome! I wonder if the thing that's following him is Jacob, I hope it is and that Jacob tells him of what happened to his sons! I hope John doesn't find out by watching that fake plane crash Charles set up on the news! D':

And Hurley really annoyed me in that episode, and then Charlie annoyed me when he assumed Hurley was lying and completely blew him off. Glad that Dean stayed and believed him. :)

Loved the chapter!
John Winchester's gonna make a cameo?! Oh my gawd, I can only guess that it'll be sad. Oh gawd, he's gonna be totally devastated to learn that his sons were on a plane crash and one that hasn't been found! I hope John gives up the hunt for the YED and instead hunt for his sons! Him appearing on the island would be awesome, along with Bobby! :D

And I loved the raft episode, I love how Dean contributed to it being built! And I love that Jin and Dean had a moment, I wonder if the two are friends now. :D