Kinda twisted. Lol. But I guess I'm twisted :p

Hot! Very kinky. I really liked it.

Definately not something I could see Edward doing.

interesting. and the projection idea is quite inventive!

Hmmmm...interesting to say the least! :D

good story lol ive ben reading you for years but now i have an account and i would apptriciate if you would read my jake and nessie story.

nessie obsessed

Just stopped, by to pay my respects, to this magnificent story of yours.

on the scale of one to 5, i would say it garners. a 3.

and well thank you for writing this story. it along with the song Tongues, inspired me, to write a similar story, titled Tongues. and its sequels. A Tongue and a Half. and Speak the Little girl's Name.

and well again, thank you for writing this. it does so, make me think of the song Tongues. that's my favorite song, from Deathstars.

is there, by any, ANY, small chance, a sequel to be had? if not well, still its a great story. *Thumbs up*

creepy but excellent writing

Wow this should be more than a one shot!

Is this only a one-shot?

O. That was different. I liked it. :)

O.o well, that was certainly... interesting. i mean it wasn't bad, not bad at all, just... different; new. lol and VERY OOC on jake's part - i doubt he would have been even remotely ok with that on any level in any world; on the other hand the way you made nessie think ed was with bells that seemed more feasible.

anyways, good job

lol neat

i guess im one of the few who can say they like this because i wrote one of these myself lol

this was good though, i liked it

Vaughn

OH WOW! lol

O...kay.

That's whacked up.

*shudder*