Continúa la historia

Continua la historia

continua la historia

Sube el siguiente capitulo de Konoha Shinken

please continue the story, I'm dying here.

He suddenly went from the goal of investigating and potentially going toward Konoha which is the closest to where he is to suddenly heading toward the desert...

I'm glad you continued this though I'm a bit disappointed that you only managed to extend it by 2 chapters. :/

I actually preferred your writing to that of the original author's; it has more consistent grammar and better outside-of-combat pacing. Seeing as we never saw you write a fight scene, I cannot comment on that. However, the dangling plot threads left in Chapter 10 irk me so much, seeing as this is likely dead. Please, return to this fic, good sir, or let someone else take up the torch.

The story is take over someone fun fiction and stop one chapter after other .I telling this to all people out there to stop writing half story.I reading hire over half fan fictions thet stop at Zabuza and Haku,others stop at clash of Naruto and Gaara and others stop at clash of Naruto and of crap.

this is really amazing! Please tell me that you are still alive and able to right dude! I only just found you!

Why did you bring in Nanto Seiken? There are more then enough antagonists in this fic, and both North and South stars teaming up seems a bit OP.

Oh well, let's see how it goes. Maybe it will be awesome.

Translation: You are already dead.

Update or cancel the story, its been 2 years since your last update.

I suggest you either update or abandon this story, it has been 2 years since your last update.

So. Koryu's met up with this fic's analog of Rei, ominous shenanigans are beginning to surround Hinata, and I expect that Konoha is going to step up their game with regards to tracking down their missing soldier.

Fine work, fine work, easily better than 90 percent of the other crap in the Naruto section.

Any ideas when you'll get the next chapter up?

In regards to the neck-twisting face-brraking punch, in some martial arts such as must thai, a knee to the face is considered the same as a punch