Reviews for Bruises
HermioneGamer chapter 12 . 12/15/2019
Oh wow... this. This. Is incredible, I’m speechless, it’s a beautiful angsty story with so much happening. It portrays the characters exactly how I do in my mind. The different point of views was great too. I felt it had a lot of closure and was just long enough. Thank you for posting this beautiful story. Your such a talented writer!
Guest chapter 12 . 1/11/2019
Love it
Guest chapter 5 . 5/3/2018
This is a really good story
mm chapter 1 . 11/2/2015
this is nice. love u 4 ever
cho9 chapter 12 . 2/9/2014
Wow.. Such a sad but proper ending :').
This story is definitely put in my Lily-James' ff list. Good job! I enjoyed it so much :))
Khloe chapter 12 . 12/27/2013
U R GR8 so great i had to use tht or somethig well good luck in your fanfics :D
Kittylover chapter 3 . 10/18/2013
Awww...such a wonderful story...love it! Keep it up!
Ambersky Goddard chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
Great story so far
rubiesandrain chapter 12 . 4/13/2012
I love this! Great job!
rubiesandrain chapter 12 . 4/13/2012
I love this! Great job!
Chasingstormshadows chapter 3 . 11/25/2010
Very nice. But what is a ward? I can't help feeling like she's not telling them, and you're not telling us, something. Perhaps I'm wrong, though. :)
Chasingstormshadows chapter 2 . 11/25/2010
I favorite-ed this story... last year, I think, and I hadn't gotten around to reading it. That's been added to my regrets. This is a really great story! I love how you made all the characters, and Lily. It's very well put together. The only, tinniest thing I find wrong, is that when a person is this,

"Well, it's Sunday." he pointed out.

The period at the end of Sunday shouldn't be there. If it's expressing who said it after the quotations it should be,

"Well, it's Sunday," he pointed out. See? Otherwise, wonderful!

And that's what I do, answering reviews, I mean. :)
SomeStrangeDay chapter 12 . 10/17/2010
awww :( such a sad ending...but such a good one. loved it.
muggleborn43 chapter 12 . 10/3/2010
Loved it!
TheCommonTrixter chapter 12 . 9/10/2010
... They didn't even KISS! It was a very good story thought )
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