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Good story

Such a good story. Wish it was longer though.

Fantastic story!

Welcome back! I just started reading this today and I am thrilled you decided to continue this story. It is very well-written and the characters are believable. Kyoya x Haruhi is by far my favorite pairing, so I have thoroughly enjoyed every bit of this.

I jumped in happiness when you mentioned Forget-me-nots. They are my favourite flower too!
Only the sad part is that you can't actually Make a bouquet of forget-me-nots; they are groundcover with very thin, short and fragile stems. The SECOND you pick them, no matter how carefully, they begin to wilt. No bouquet I've ever made has ever lasted even ten minutes before wilting into mush. ;_; *pout*

I am very curious on how this story ends. Please finish it?

PET!? Awesome awesome awesome awesome cliffhanger!

To much laughter, so much cuteness, a nice dose of serious and maturity, and some beautiful reactions for Haruhi. I love how you've incorporated the animeisms into the story - it works really well without being completely over the top. I hope that you are able to finish this story one day! :)

good. i just can't last reading this. now i will have to finish the manga since i can't take it i need to know what the ending is. thank you for helping me choose to read the end

aww that was so cool! i like the ending (is it the ending?) idk but it makes a good ending it was funny and awesoem good job! Looved it!

This is such a good story! You have really capture all the Host's personalities very well! Please, Please, PLEASE update soon! I like this story a lot!

I almost never review (I know, horrible of me-in fact, I can't even remember the last time I DID) but I had to write and let you know how much I ADORED this. The characterization was wonderful (I especially loved your Kyouya) and I thought the storyline was cute; it helped a lot that it was also something likely to happen-then again, when you're dealing with the Twins, ANYTHING could happen. It's JUST like the twins to set up a kissing contest! Haha!

Because I always keep careful notes while reading KyouyaXHaruhi fiction (my favorite kind-always have to know where to find it again later!) I am able to tell you my favorite parts (in no particular order):

-The detail about Kyouya sketching ideas in his notebook and labeling it "moe"

-The chemicals of love scene - I liked how Kyouya's complicated thoughts and feelings contrasted the clinical definitions Haruhi was giving him

-The part where Kyouya reminds Haruhi of "silk-headed razor blades" - I think that's the closest description of Kyouya I've yet seen

-"You were overwhelmed by your feelings for me and the memory of my perfection became too much, so you sought council from my best friend. When his words failed to comfort you, he selflessly held you in my place!" I laughed until I cried; that was EXACTLY what Tama-chan would say! There I go again, laughing! Perfect.

-Kyouya's threat of inventing a debt again - Very True and Very Scary coming from him. shudder

-"pretending that our extravagant overseas purchases are akin to a mother and father doing common grocery shopping" - Ain't that the gospel truth? The frank way Kyouya said that gave me another bout of hearty (and painful) laughter.

Is chapter 10 the end? It looks like it was last updated a long time ago, and I'm grateful you appear to have stopped at a non-cliff-hanging point (I hate it when it feels like people stop half way through a sentence and then give up writing the story forever!) but I think this is definitely worth continuing: I haven't had this much fun reading a fanfic in a LONG time.

Please update soon, I want to see what happens next.

I love this story but when are you going to update.