DO NOT END STORY HERE ! SEQUEL?

Was the restaurant muggle? The reports ?

Why doesn't Severus tell the reporters this is his wife ?

Hermione nasty to a house elf ? WOW

I thought this was a Severus Hermione story?

Why the focus on her stomach? Is she pregnant already by him? Or by someone else? Lust drugged she he take a lust potion to be able to sleep with her ?

I love the elf, Leafer, and I hope you write about her further adventures as she is quite a delightful character that you have created!

Cool take on the typical SSHG story. Refreshing.

Who knew that house elves could be so 'human'? lol

This is ridiculous. I expected a Regency fic based off of the prompt you listed before the dirt chapter but this entire story is a farce. Cameras? Modern sounding restaurants? References to 007 movies? These are bad enough, but the plot is all over the place. You have no real explanations for why things have happened and now you're simply throwing them together in a rushed, forced reconciliation. I also find your Hermione to be incredibly OOC. It was a nice try, but this needs a lot of work. I can't even go on and finish it.

Hahaha! I love Leafer! XD

so. im not gunna lie. Severus's words in this chapter reminded me of the Phantom in Phantom of the Opera. haha. great so far. tho i wouldn't have left him. . . haha

aaw...it was really good. you did a GREAT job on it. I have never read such a story as this. it was a very good AU. :) I like Leafer and what she did. LOL

This house-elf proved to be quite the schemer. That was a very enjoyable read.

Leafer:1 Everyone else:0