Hmm. My first review isn't showing. So, I'll say it again. I LOVED IT!

love it please write more

GREAT story! Mostly, I just wanted to say that I REALLY appreciate your keeping all your authors note until the end of the story. Personally I really hate having to scroll through them when they are at the beginnig, so, thanks for that! t

Ok, this needs to be said before I continue reading. When Jhon "vows" on his mother's grave I got the chills. That conversation was worded in such a way that I can believe it would come straight from John over the rest of the brothers, with the exception of Gordon. But that's beside the point. This story is so amazing and I'm not even close to being halfway through it!

OK, this is the second night in a row i have stayed up to an ungodly hour,4.20am tonight and 5.30am last night, because i couldnt stop reading this. While i nearly reviewed on every chapter, i thought it best to express my praise at the end.

This was BRILLIANT story, that i loved and, aside from a few easily fixed errors, found to be a well written, well thought out wonderful story. I loved how the characters were portrayed and the story was compelling and addictive, thanks for making me real 40 chapters in 2 nights. This story was a brilliant escape from life and i will be returning to it again in the future. 3

Please keep writing, oh and the convos at the end were funny and very similar to conversations i would have :)

does alan die

Every time Lucy calls Jeff rocket man I cry a little

This is a wonderful work,with action, suspense, and a wonderful ending that ties up loose ends. So far the only plot hole I see is that Kate Espes wasn't introduced earlier in the story and is just showing up now.

Despite this I give your forty chapter story 5 / 5 stars as it is a wonderful work. I suggest you refine your tecnique slightly ( because, while Alan is a good kid, most people would be having more issues with potentially permanent paralysis. And Alan, given his antics when dealing with Hood strikes me as a person who would of been louder while his family is being held at gunpoint because of him. ) and then start working on a novel of your own creation ( Which given how well fleshed out your OCs are shouldn't be a problem. )

Whatever path you take good luck.

Omg! Only a few chapters in and I really see what you mean about this series being better. Don't get me wrong I LOVE! The original series but this is bloody brilliant! It definitely does have a much more realistic sense and Alan is no way near as post child/early angsty teenager. Anymore. He's still a teenager but already shows that he's going to become a man soon. Can not wait to see where this goes!

Hi, loving this story.
The section about the Anaphylaxis was very well written. Not many people realise that being that allergic to something changes your life in many ways.
I HATE almost all practical jokes and TV shows that seem to encourage them eg Funnest Home Video.
I have had severe Anaphylaxis attacks in my life... And just like with Alen one was because someone put what I am allergic to (Almonds) in my food despite me telling people that I was allergic... The reason? They thought I was lying... Oh and they believed that you could only be allergic to peanuts.
I am wondering how the story would go if one of the boys had a severe allergic reaction or injury during a rescue and was found by someone that is not a Thunderbird.
Oh... How about one of the boys having an allergic reaction on TB5 because they were allergic to bees or spiders and one 'stowed' away on TB3?
I believe a scientist in a scientific research station was bitten by a snake that stowed away in cargo.
... Oh a satire of a satire... Snakes on a Spaceship
With thanks for same very good reading
Ngaire

Love the story! Lol, caught the nurse's family's names. Love Phillip Winchester! :) I haven't been back at the Thunderbirds fanfiction for a while, but I've tried my hand at hurt/comfort Thunderbirds and stunk. Live & learn though. I might try again witha muse in my head. Again, great story! Sorry for the rant.

Guess I did like it after all...and i couldn't help noticing quite a few cross over characters present in the fic...lol nice job

KnightStrider49

Lol just read ch 10, still not sure if I'm liking all the angst and drama but i think I'll keep reading and find out...I did however notice the use of a familiar MASH name and quote (yeah Im a major MASH fan) and I just had to comment on it...it was a particularly good use of the quote...though it was funny to hear that it was a chick anyway onto the next chapter I guess!

KnightStrider49

Totally awesome!

Our personal demon child...love that line