Just being realistic here. As a mom, there is absolutely no way I would leave my four year old toddler with a friend for 2 weeks, especially a male friend.

I'm pretty sure 90% of moms would agree with me...that's a big NOPE.

In that sense, the story felt a big too unrealistic for me. I'd rater ask my parents to babysit my little one.

I know you had to create that scenario, for the sake of the plot but I think you could've thought up a different scenario in this case. That's the opinion of the mom in me.

why did she freak out with her fianncee and then cheat on him

Cute

This was rather disappointing to be honest. I thought it was going somewhere but it didn't. Oh well...

Who the hell takes their girlfriend who has a child on a two week vacation and why the hell would she even consider that for only a 6 month marker?

Loved it

I have too hard a time reading any story that places Hermione "the brightest witch of her age" in any sort of subordinate position to Draco. Sorry. Too misogynistic for my tastes.

Beautiful ending for Dramione!
Nicely done!

I actually thought Viktor then Oliver as the father so I was surprised when it was neither.

Draco saying goodbye before Hermione and her daughter left for vacation was touching. I hope they return to him!

Hooray for Dramione! About time!

Whoa for the loud intruder.

This story was perfect! Wasn't angsty but had enough drama to keep out from being boring . You are truly talented! one of the best stories I have read :)

I have to say i think your hermione is a bitch and draco is too good for her.

I loved this story :)

I know this was posted a while ago but I would just like to say that it is excellent ) I know you mentioned a few times that English isn'nt your first language but your grammar is still better than half of the people who have been speaking it their whole lives!

Nine siblings? Are you a missing Weasley?