It's been a couple of years since I've read this again. Always brings me a sense of nostalgia, probably why I always deemed it to be the best bleach fanfiction I've read (Especially with a Ichigo pairing), beautifully written and brings me back to simpler times when I first read it.
Though I realised how amazing it truly is, back then I had been younger so I never understood much about emotions and all but I do now which is a lovely thing to experience. Seeing Hazumi and Ichigo's budding relationship in a knew light was beautiful that I even thought to myself that I hope to one day have someone look at me as Ichigo does. He certainly lives to his name of 'he who protects'.

Thank you for allowing me to have the pleasure of reading this all over again.
It's always stayed with me, though I couldn't remember what happened in detail, I did always remember the feelings I had of it.

Damn! I haven't read this story in a loooong while! But reading it now feels like coming home! This fic never fails to inspire a deeply ingrained sense of awe and strangely warmth too. Definitely one of my special stories.

And I do have to say... I've not found another Ichigo/OC story on here or anywhere else (I'm looking at you AO3) that even comes close to comparing itself to Fractured Hesitation. It has no equal or I would've found it by now.

I would ask for a sequel (because I'm utter trash for this pairing; No Regrets about it! Lol!) but I'm sure you've moved on to other things like other fandoms and life, so I won't.

This one story is good enough for me! *Goes on to read the rest of the story happily*

This fanfic should have gotten more appreciations and reviews abkdlshsl. I really love this fanfic and already re-read this a couple times and my heart just agdjdlflhdl. This story is so beautiful I just can't describe this feeling everytime I read this. Even though I don't really follow Bleach, I'm really glad I found this story accidentally Thank you for making this fanfic

I loved this soooo much!

This is amazing. This was actually the very first bleach fanfiction that I ever read, way back before I even registered onto . I always remembered this, just always stuck out for me. Brings back a lot of memories, Thank you

Oh, I also wanted to point out that (o)nii-san/chan and (o)nee-san/chan are what a younger sibling addresses an older sibling as, whereas an older sibling would refer to a younger brother as otōto and imōto for younger sister. So Hosyu would call Hazumi "imōto" or just "Hazumi-chan" if he wanted to be cute. I've seen people use "imō-chan" but it's kinda used to talk down to the sibling, which, by their relationship, I could see Hosyu doing, lol!

I don't know when the last time you looked at this site/story was, but I need you to know that I love you...r writing. Lol! This story was fabulous. I need to read more. You need to write more, because you are amazing at it. Or not, you do you. But know that I think you're great. I feel like a creep now, so I'm just...gonna...leave...CIAO! (ps you need to write about the Quincy stuff...well, not need, but I would love it if you do!)

I loved everything about this story. You wrote your character so well, it-it was just amazing. Seriously I'm not kidding. I felt like if there were more people who saw bleach and were intrested in reading fanfic about it, your reviews and favorites would have totally been more.
Thanks for writing such a fabulous story :)

Oh my goodness I LOVE THIS!

Seriously, YOURE AN AWESOME WRITER!

Well, now that I have finished this story I must say that I am extremely pleased with the way the story went. You are a talented writer, no doubt there, that has remarkable skills and I just wanted to say thank you for writing Fractured Hesitation. I don't normally read stories that have OC's but I am glad I gave your story a chance. I have only one problem with the story, which is the ending. I like the ending an all but I am confused at what happens with ichigo and Aizen. Did things happen like they did in the anime or what? Once again I'd like to thank you for writing such a extraordinary story and I hope to read more of your work.

Good lord. I wouldn't be surprised if it was part of the Kido division entry exam to be able to pronounce ridiculously long words. "Hiryugekizokushintenraiho!" WTF.

Great

This story is probably one of the most underrated stories on ff. Great job on writing it! Pacing was sometimes off, and action scenes were at time confusing, but it was still a great read!

Finally hichigo appears! :D

I loved the ending XD and during the awesome battles you put so much detail in it I was tense and freaking out and I was crying because it was so awesome!