I've never read a story blike this one with Ada and Leon. It was very nice. I enjoyed it. Thanks.

This is so heartbreaking and beautiful. Sigh. I love it.

You write beautifully. The way you've portrayed Ada in this, as well as a few of your other fics, I've seen, is that while she doesn't ever truly let her guard down, you still see her doubt, and her worries. This is my favorite kind of Ada to see. She's always been one of my favorites for her complexity.

Also, I was somewhat surprised to have seen Angela as the mother of Leon's children. Most writers seem to like to stick to the Claire/Leon/Ada triangle more often. It was a nice change of pace.

Anyway, you are a fabulous writer. I'm a big fan. :)

That was so beautiful. The length and tone were perfectly judged. Whilst (purposefully) angsty it was mature, in character and completely satisfying to read on all levels. That's a hard thing to manage. Bravo!

Wow. Very touching oneshot, and i have to say beautiful ending. Im not at all a fan of Leon x Angela, but i adore the scenario you have laid out for Leon and Ada. Very fitting twist of fate, one that i can truly see (but hope it doesnt) happen. But after all this is Resident Evil, and characters dont always get happy endings, especially if youve dabbled with Wesker and Umbrella. Very nicely written, short and simple. Well done

Crimson xx

Holy christ this is good. Beyond good. Keep it up.

... That was amazing. I love the idea of Ada leaving Leon. I love them together but the hardships are my favorite. I'm thinking that makes me cruel, but what can I say? Cruel is the way I am. I'm sorry to say that I can't see him with Angela or children for that matter, but you wrote it well. Made my day, actually.

I hate Angela... but the truth is that I imagine she being Leon's girlfriend. she is normal, not like Ada. Leon and Ada love each other, but they can't be together, everybody know it :'-( , and is logical that they see other people.

Well... I love LeonxAda, it is my favorite pairing of RE, and I liked how you wrote this story ... was very good. Go to favorites .

PD: I think I see a little bit of Wesker/Ada here hehe! ;-)

I really feel like crying! Beautiful... Realistic too! Even if I'm not Angela's number one fan, she IS a possibility for Leon's happiness(argh I loath to admit it XD)and could bring back his trust in the opposite sex.

I would ask for a sequel full of Ada/Leon's fluffiness, but somehow I think it would kind of ruin the fic's poetry... As sad as it is, Ada still leave an indelible mark in Leon's life. Just how it should be.

Still the absolutely romantic little girl in me is left thoroughly dissatisfied... T_T Have you another Ada/Leon fic planned?

Great great job anyways...

I found myself holding my breath a lot while reading this. There were just so many suspenseful and bittersweet moments. I can't tell you how well you wrote Ada-everything from her past to her reasons for joining Wesker, but ultimately, her feelings towards Leon. You wrote her so well that I literally felt her pain and teared up at the end.

This fic has an original plot and BEAUTIFUL writing. Thank you so much for sharing this. Easily one of the best one-shots I've ever read.

I'm still in awe...