Your Plot is sooo good! I Love how you captured yori and her VH exam, especially how she won this dammn thing. So sweet of Zero ** and plz Update cuz this is one of the best fanfics based on Yori. So Good Job!

I am a native french speaker and you are confusing your le and your 's lea toilette and la glace not le toilette and le glace

wow, this is an amazing story, i'm going crazy about it, pleas update soon, or did you abandoned this amazing story ?, i hope you will update soon. ( pleas )

please update have you forgotten about us just please update i'll even be your slave

This is just...amazing. Your fic is actually one of the few sayorixzero fic out there and I love it! The party was a great idea. Maybe some feelings might appear, who knows! Please keep updaiting and don't give up! you are an amazing writter and every time you feel like giving up, just think you are killing a tree, I know it has nothing to do but trees are good. Everybody loves them. Don't kill trees and just help make a better world :D and update, Please!

WTF! Its been 6 mon and theres not another chapter. Can u hurry plz?

the 1 one

How old r u?

Contuine, contuine, contuine, CONTUINE!
Please this story is so fantastic! Make me want to squeal and jump with joy! And not only that, this is a(n) ZeroxYori coupl story! I just love Yori she is so awesome! You have to contuine, please!
ZEROxYORI FOREVER, You fan lovers!
Contuine the story and I will give you cookies.

Yay!

hurrry make the next one !

just go with the flow of your writing abilites

you did great u need to space more tho some words are squished up.

OMG
now now...that was realy mean of you to end the chapter like that hahahahaha
now i realy want to know what is going to hapend
please up and don't abandon this realy nice story!
I will be waiting for the next chap.
kissu kissu from InG-chan ;)

i think you could skip the exam; it might be better to have flashbacks. but this is only an opinion