So sorry but I have no idea how to send a PM without reviewing...
Anyway I was going to ask if you could maybe think about posting my story 'Her New Pride' in The Original Characters of Camelot community?
Again, really very sorry about not knowing how to send a PM.
Thanks :D

I. Love. It.

First of all, it's very refreshing to see a logical explanation (as well as a story behind) why a female OC is a newsie. Your attention to detail is such that not a single second of any scene is missed, but it's not in any way monotonous. The plot itself is extremely interesting and has that certain original twist that is so rare these days. I love the idea of the pairing, too. And the fact that we know ahead of time (seeing as how, in the future, her name had changed) does not in any way make it boring or predictable. It simply takes away the question of "who?" and replaces it with "how?".

I eagerly await a new chapter like I have not in some time. My hat is off to you.

yay! I really like this story!

It's really cool that you actually took notice to the fact that the turn of the century weren't the best times for women. So thank you for that.

for now,

newsie dork from D.U.M.B.O.

Another wonderful chapter! And it's so well written, as alays. Loving it still!

Very long chapter!

Great job it was very realistic.

I just have to say how diffrent this time trasvel story is from other stories. It's more orignal.

Can't wait to see what happens!

-Jodi

I clicked on this story expecting it to be an average run of the mill Mary Sue story, but I'm thrilled to say it's not. There are many impressive things about this chapter. First of all, I like Jody because she doesn't have Mary Sue qualities. She was dropped in another time period and in other people's lives, but she's not stealing the show and demanding all the attention. The original characters are are emphasised just as the OC, and that makes it a good story.

The descriptions of the Jacobs family life was wonderful and well written. I wish more people would write about them this way. Thank you for not writing Sarah off like most authors would because you added to her character and made her more interesting. This is the way I imagined she could have been in the movie.

Many authors forget Newsies took place in the Victorian era, which meant it isn't an exciting time for girls. You addressed it so well through the different characters. It is unfair, but it's not the boys fault because that is what they've been taught.

This chapter was great. I loved it. If the rest of your story is like this I'd love to keep reading it. Keep writing!

-Repeat

Okay. I feel better now. You write David really well...kinda makes me feel like the movie. I can't decided if I like him or hate him. Um, another good chapter, obviously. Like that really needs repeated!

Okay, I'm guessing you tweaked 4, and re uploaded it? Cause if not I'm not only confused, but psychic...But I think I noticed a few extra paragraphs thrown in...Oh, hey! THis is what happened before you quit The Newsie and The Reporter...I got all confused and such...don't you dare, missy! I'll be mad at you!

What a fascinating start! I'm riveted, now :) Not to jump around in the chapter too much, but I just finished it and the tylenol line is still making me laugh. I can just imagine one of my friends disappearing, then years later leaving me their estate and a journal in a will from 1939. I think we'd be way past tylenol and on into prescription-necessary medication, at that point! Anyway, I can't wait to see what happens next - I'm dying to know who walked into her life and how she got sent back in time!

Another wonderful chapter. Though if I was Jody, I probably would have punched Jack and David square in the nose.

I absolutely adore your writing style and attention to detail. I'm definately getting sucked into this story, and can't wait to see how it plays out!

Ooh, Jody got transported!

I like the way you did that how it was like a wizard witch thing that transported her.

Please update soon!

-Jodi

Ok you've totally caught my attention. I love the whole will idea, it's very interesting. Not too many Denton fics out there either, especially not with OC's. Kinda nice to see something a bit different! Can't wait to see where this goes, I'm definiatly looking forward to more!

~CES

I love the originality of your ideas! Most time-travel newsies fics are horribly written, and planned out, but this one is so fresh, I love it!

Can't wait to read more, and I'm sure eventually I'll get over the loss of The Newsie and the Reporter!

Great story!

I've never read a Denton/OC fic before so i am very excited about this one.

One of my favorite parts is the name: Jody Forrester.;) It rolls of the tounge.

Update Soon!

-Jodi