Can I just say thank you for posting this. It's exceptionally well written and you kept the characters believable, even in a situation that most people probably haven't considered (because it's out of character or whatever... But you brought out the dark humanity in the characters and you did it very well, so if you get ignored or criticised just ignore it. ) I enjoyed this and when I can get my phone to behave I'll look up your other writing with keen interest! - sivvussa

I think you wrote very well. It was dark, yes, but so is human nature. There are plenty of stories on here with numair saying and doing all the "right" things that, frankly, most men wouldn't. I think your fic did an awesome job contrasting those stories.

I absolutely love this idea, I've considered writing one very similar before I found this one. It fits Numair's character very well in my opinion; that deep down, he DOES want her, and will, on occasion, lose himself in this kind of fantasy. He doesn't want to, and he feels awful afterwards, but it still happens.
Perfectly written. Love it.

i don't think i have laughed so hard in a week your fic made my day. btw when i read the books i always wondered what numair was thinking halve the time

This was really really good. I like the comment someone else made-you did it in such a way that the idea we all hold of Numair isn't tarnished but we get to see the side of him that Tammy doesn't show us. I think secretly we all wish this had happened lol, I won't deny it /blush. You did it artfully and served only to glorify my image of noble and moral Numair :)

So I'm REALLY happy that was a dream. The back of my mind was thinking... this is almost rape. And while in Immortals I don't think about their age, all I could think about here was Numair being a player and taking advantage of her.

Having him wake up, feel remorseful and then realizing that he couldn't do something like that was the perfect way to explore the idea without destorying Numair.

As a whole this piece was effective, and a good read. It had me involved and the ending made me appreciate the beginning.

Nice work!

hm...an interesting idea. although i'm not used to seeing anything like this, i can see this story happening in a horribly twisted dream.. anyways, well written my dear! keep up the good work!

I like this. Just the kind of dream an experienced man might have about an inappropriate (so he thinks) attraction.

Wow. Dark, but very realistic (In the dark desires, not in numair actually doing that). Great job.

Wow...powerful. Interesting Idea too. Numair was very experienced and even if he was too good to Daine to push her that doesn't mean he didn't want more...much more adult and darker than we usually see but I liked it. Makes a lot of sense to have it as a dream sequence sine it would never actually happen in canon but it could definitely be a restrained desire of his. Good work!

Wow! Captures him well, IMHO! And the last line. . . Wow.

As I told you when I first read it, I don't think it would be weird for Numair to act this way in a dream, considering it's his deepest, darkest subconcious desires.

Good as usual m'dear.