I cried so hard when I read this.

"SHE'S NOT A VIRGIN BRIDE!" Hahahahahahahahahahah! I almost peed when I read this.

very nice plot i love what you did with switching back in forth with POV's. you did a very nice job with the intimate scenes

P.S

sinc big enough Twilght Fan to write a Fanfiction for it I want to share with you a ver awesome Twilight Fan Site...

.com ... here there are a bunch of Twifans just like you there is a public chat room blogs photos and all the updates about the movies and cast you love most...

So I hope to talk to you there TTYL

Sincerly

Twifan #1

Danielle Kaplinger AKA Macky

! everything was going so well im in tears specially since im team edward

it's so cute love it x3

love

xx

twin

aww great story (:

I luv this story! Yay Edward survived! Woo! Plz write again soon :D

]oh my god this is sooo sad. you started it soo well and it looked like things were going to be happy with a baby, and then BOOM you throw in that Edward's dying. i was crying so bad that my mom thought somethin was wrong. i told her that edward was dyin and she was like okay... lol. Even though it was sad it was well written and very good. great job!

fabulous stroy! definetly "stephenie meyer worthy"

This story is amazing and sad at the same time.I love how well you used your are very creative.

This was so amazing its beyond comprehestion(Did I spell correctly)You deserve every single complament you get this was so sad and so hartwarming you should so consider becomeing writer because you are amazing at it and any one who doesn't know that is completely and utterly mentaly retarded

*gasp* I had predicted that edward was going to die, since you stated that it was not good for team Edward fans, but when I got to the end, my eyes became glossy, and if there had been anymore in this chapter, I probably would have started crying. I'm a team Jacob fan, but I feel so sorry for them all. A friend recommended this to me, and said she had to stop because it was so sad. So, this actually means that it was very well written, and I hope you continue, so the real waterworks will come. ;) ~BookJunkiez

amazing. good luck publishing it when you're older. :D

If I had to say how I felt about this story in one word it would be-wow. Thias was amazing and I absolutely loved it. Please write more!