I have been waiting for over 4 years for the next chapter Next Chapter: Taking Care of Business

You moved waay, waaay too fast in the beginning of this chapter. That's alright if nothing of any real importance happened, but... well... lots of stuff happened! He graduated high school at twelve, joined the Foreign Legion, went crab fishing, and who knows what else!? I sure don't, there was so much stuff packed into such long paragraphs. And the crab fishing thing seemed shoehorned in there just because you like Deadliest Catch; nothing happened to him there, he didn't make any lifelong friends, and I highly doubt it's going to come up again.

You should continue this story. And are you working on 'Some Tea Between Friends' By SecondSeraphim?

Nice!

Nice story. I hope you continue to write it sometime.

wicked awesome thank god keitaro seems to have an actual spine in this lol, but i really like this fic , plus ge's with a girl not from the hinato sou which good as well, but overall really well and just awesome lol

Wow, your Naru is a bit more... er, retarded... than I would have expected. Cute the way Shampoo got pwned, by the way.

man what a chapy, keep it up

this fic is good and I mean really REALLY good...I like the fact no one dares to raise a hand on Keitaro as they know what Shampoo would do them kukukukukukukuku.

please try update as soon as you can this too good to be left like that.

Lemons? Yes, please.

great progress so far. im currios about motoko and keitaro.

Nice chapter, and I'm not sexist or anything but aren't all female construction companies kinda hard to do since there are certain aspects of construction that need really strong individuals to do, and I can see why it would take several days if it is all female construction, as for lemons yes I would like to see them in this story between Keitaro and Shampoo, anyway what about the other girls is possible pairings?

Completely understandable for a longtime Saints fan to add a shout-out like that. I was rooting for the Colts, but even I was happy for New Orleans. Brees suffers a career threatening injury a few years ago, is turned down by the Dolphins, and is able to lead a tortured franchise to greatness.

I don't want a lemon, but I do want there to be more physical and sexual/romantic interaction between Keitaro and Shampoo. They're newlyweds, why are they acting like an old married couple? It doesn't have to be some obnoxious, overtly passionate thing where they can't keep their hands off each other, but you have them acting more like brother and sister instead of husband and wife.

Content is what I would rather have over lemons.

I look forward to more.

Well, well, soldier...

Hoo-rrah! 1º review, btches!

Now, this was interesting.

Motoko got OWN3D! LOL That made my day.

And Sham-chan smothering Shin-chan? LMAO THAT was N-I-CE!

And then, it's all smooth sailing from there on. Nothin' too eventful goin' on.

Slow but steady progress. That's good.

Quote of the day: “Why would I want a girl, when I have a woman?" ROFL THAT totally told Da Btch off! ROFLOL

Nice work, son. Keep it up!

Update ASAP! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!