| Reviews for In Omne Tempus |
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ForeverTheWhiteTiger chapter 10 . 5/9 So sweet 3 |
ForeverTheWhiteTiger chapter 9 . 5/9 So good! |
ForeverTheWhiteTiger chapter 8 . 5/8 Jared is such a fun character! |
ForeverTheWhiteTiger chapter 7 . 5/8 Love the Leah and Bella friendship dynamics! |
ForeverTheWhiteTiger chapter 6 . 5/8 This was so emotional, love it! |
ForeverTheWhiteTiger chapter 4 . 5/8 Such progress! |
ForeverTheWhiteTiger chapter 3 . 5/8 Great chapter! |
ForeverTheWhiteTiger chapter 2 . 5/8 Love this! |
ForeverTheWhiteTiger chapter 1 . 5/8 Really great opening chapter! Totally sets the scene! |
Debbie Hicks chapter 24 . 4/8 25. Epilouge 2. then Bitten with Alien Venom then too late with him then three with four thousands then he was Venomous with seven on the way split then too late Aliens/Vulcans overdrained as all of it ripped then too late with the kids/toddlers began aging then the guard found us/army take them out then too late Head-Cord Memories erased then good you Are punished of Immortal children took from us/they then Nothingness by both first death but came Immortality after both with brain surgeries good they are dead then brought there Venom spreading then too late more than as all of it escaped where you think are leaving then get them/army then then Pierced by popping then brought there good drained as no blood the both found the drained of blood herself died of childbirth with they are Next with child the blew up then too late Rest good they are dead of it they had eight hybrid kids are all-Venomous followed then brought there Irina/others see them you die there then too late killed then too late the damages to us/they never had kids again so they the kids were phased as teenagers Lost as too muvch blood then nuked Blacking outside sliced with they vanished with they good never was alive then too late More guards of the Volturi bitten freely good ours with these ones the Oiled/massaged/lathering but Lotioned then too late Scented ones then lost from here then More aboard to last ones then then suddenly too late Were as all of them on Vulcan then remains made a Planetary base sliced then Vanished with few/last/final ones vanished good what then gauzed naked then too late killed more Volturi guards then never had kids us/army as all of them suddenly oh crap she was moaning in Vulcan oh my god then too late on our new planet Noises pf us/they were louder than normal caused Strom to grumble he Had a very more fiery Worst temper were Jared I Find you so sexy oh god you gamble too darn much oh man her accented sounded like Marina Sirits's voice patterns nice cut thanks Alice found it very stylish with cropped bangs and you are my imzadi then too late gasp Paul's voice was with Rachel A-hem I Need a beer to swallow oh! Pack she is counseling me really she is with a Job as a Chief Counselor Paul you are with me Rachel crap what onto us Vulcan robes to heal yikes Got my own Moaning Myrtle from Harry Potter seduced me I have Woman trouble he was a teenager with a mate who is his in his age group Spit what you heard me Seth Where's Leah here my best friends nicknamed me after a ghost they done to us/they who Volturi the two did this to us/they held her wand acting fierce the Mudbloods her accent sounded British yikes Sir! name Myra oh my god crap she is clad looking like who Harmione Granger Momma mia easy girl meet Crookwretch weird name Gulp Paul stood over 6 feet 5 inches still muscular he sweated under the Vulcan heat wave was Murderous her hair was messy but in the 1980's fashion tangled Captain yes she is his mate yes he imprinted on me had his kids eight oh no not him he was afraid of him ulp was the Don Knotts of Vulcan. |
Cavelenare chapter 23 . 5/16/2019 I thought she was on the pill?! |
Cavelenare chapter 16 . 5/15/2019 What? That’s it? Problem solved? |
Cavelenare chapter 15 . 5/15/2019 I don’t understand her reaction: maybe it needs a second pass |
Cavelenare chapter 9 . 5/15/2019 Yesssssss what a marvelous ending to this chapter! |
TinaF chapter 24 . 4/18/2019 Amazing! Thank you for writing and sharing it. |