We all know Raven wants the greenis.

That was great.

I cant for the life of me understand why this fic only has ONE review. It's a work of art and a beauty of one at that. You painted such a vivid rainbow of emotions and showed such strong passion with the characters, Beastboy especially.

The one line 'Why cant I just kill you and have her for myself' it really drove home just who he is. Beastboy will do anything for those he cares about even at his own expense, he just cant be slefish when it comes to his friends and loved ones. Star came off a bit bratty and spoiled (she is royalty though so its understandable) but at the very end I think she got it and understood what was going on in BB's head the whole time.

I would like to see you continue this piece a bit more, perhaps a second chapter 'Open your eyes' lol, but it would be fitting I think. This showed BB and Star's POV's towards Raven, but it would be nice to see her side of the equation and whats going on in her mind, what she thinks about the two of them and how she feels about them.

Aside from that, just getting to see where this thing goes and how it plays out would be cool. I would like to see how BB and Star keep that promise they made for Rae, just how far it would go you know? Would she protect BB physically, mentally and emotionally for Raven's sake? Would BB do the same for her? Would they try to build a bond of friendship for her? How far would they go for the other one to insure Raven's happyness?

You left many questions and many possibilities here, and I hope to see you answer them down the road.

Keep up the good work, and please dont let this wonderful piece of writing remain where it is, keep it going, build it up, make it thrive. You've got the touch, you just need to use it.

Till next time, Ja Ne.

Now That's What I Call A Three-Way, Excellent Job!