Hi I know you haven't written this for forever but it's so good and if you feel like writing more I mean yeah I love it.

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please, I've suffered this cliffhanger long enough

Oh this has so much promise! I’m sure you had your reasons for not finishing it, but I’m sad I’ll never read the end as I’m sure it would have been amazing.

So this was a great start and I couldn't wait for the next chapter, I loved the way you showed a multifaceted Kirk and would wish that you continued the story but it has been about 8 years...

OH MAN! Great angst fuel. Your writing style is wonderfully suspenseful and poignant.

You should update, its gokd

Maybe for your next chapter you could do one where spock has to do a nerve pinch on him so that Pike can actually talk to him.

This is so cool, why on earth isn't it finished

Amazing writing, spot-on characterization. I really hope you finish this.

Please, Please, continue this! it's amazing and I HAVE to read more! It's criminal that there isn't more. I can't wait to see how JT deals with Star Fleet and the Enterprise crew.
-LCW

Ohhhh I so wish this was continued! So good!

super, will you ever update, hope you do and soon xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Ummmm...Is this continued elsewhere? Because it's been quite a long while since any update was made and we poor readers were left in the lurch. So! Did you abandon the poor story that was just getting good? Or are there plans in the works for continuing it?

Please update soon, dammit!