Why couldn't he go back? Everyone needs someone to care for them.

i would love to read more of this

... Okay, that was mildly depressing... But still good! Thanks for writing it!

Ummm... any chance of making this a three-shot? Just... 0_0 poor John!

Awe, that is so beautiful and so sad

*runs off to look for a sequel that will make it all better for John*

No sequel?

so sad. loved it. athena

I red both fan fictions you wrote and I loved them.

You managed to put so much feeling in them, I almost cried for Sheppard at the ending of Virga.

And the relationship of Ronon and Evan, I can almost see it in front of my eyes.

I hope you will write a third story about those men, because I really, really love them.

Awesome!

More please. I would love a three way if you are so inclined.

Also, I love Becoming David Connors. I tried to give my review for the previous chapters, but my computer was having issues.

Thank you so much for your incredible stories.

Aww.. that was once again beautifully written and sad. John better come back! Sad when he had that tear slide down.

Please, please continue with this in the future. I know you don't need another fic to write but this is lovely. The pov, the contrasts and emotions. Thanks for sharing this!

Oh Man, that was beautiful but so sad. I loved it. You are the queen of the unusual pairings.

oh wow more plse!

just as I was about to sign off to go to bed after a very busy day, one quick check of my email revealed a new story and I thought I quickly read it and then I thought that I can't just not review it ... so here we are.

this is getting to be a very emotional story with john crying and all. I do hope he'll go back. I am all for happy endings, RL tends to be a bit stingy for those so fanfiction has to make up the difference (at least in my book) :-)

The sex was amazingly hot actually, so that alone makes me want more. I also really like your Evan Lorne (in all your stories) so it is nice to see him in a staring role.

The titles of your stories/chapters are better than the new word a day calendars. I really quite like quirky words and you know really quite a lot. Thank you for this lovely story :-)