you did really good! i liked it very much! even the characters were not OC! i've been looking forever to find such a story!

Wow I wanted to cry but am at work ... PS did he really get raped in the real story?

Love it! Very well done!

Fantastic. But one little thing..."Bocchan". You use 'young master' and I think it really fitting to only use that. If you were writing in japanese, 'Bocchan' would be acceptable, but as it stands, this is in english.

Otherwise, perfect.

Very nice story. Intriguing. I liked the way it was written, it's not a style I'm used to seeing in fanfics. And I love the sins you chose.

. Wonderful work! I might take a look at some of your other Kuroshitsuji fics when I have the time .

~ClosetGoth

I love your Kuroshitsuji fanfics! .

this is amazing! I love it! So sad at the end though but that's kuroshitsuji all over though...Keep writing you're really good!

This is a really good story!

woah! so intense! the whole story was! good grief! i liked it though:D

So wonderfully dark, for a first attempt at writing a Kuroshitsuji story, I think you did a fantastic job. Well written, you kept very nicely to the characters.

I hope to see more in the future.

A.B.

the ending .. T_T

i sad... :(

huhu...but overall this niceee! :D

Wow! I love how you added separate details in-between the spacings of the story. It made me have to keep up and fallow along, simple measures but it defiantly adds detail and excitement.

You have all of there characters down to the finest detail!

Giving you five stars. ;3

I love it especially the ending

defiantly enjoyed it! I like the ending, how you get an inside look at Sebastians thoughts. You did a wonderful job.