First of all, "Offer yourself up to me," Yuki commanded his voice thickly laced with desire...what a turn on line! Gods! And second the last paragraph just brought tears to my eyes...what a cute ending...and a bonus lemon too...wow! :D win win fr all lemon fans a.k.a pervs like me ;D

Shuichi's little conversation with Yuki just broke my heart...seriously The shuichi...that energetic little bundle of joy getting ds depressed and suicidal...damn u yuki!

I had noop idea a gravitation fic could be ds angsty...wow! U brought out all the darker aspects of the storyline I guess...all the times yuki used to ignore shuichi...! Haah! Now beat that yuki!

Oh dear...! No!

Oh god, it was awesome ! 'Really love your way of writing. Thank you for this great story.

you should add a chapter about there life in the country

Awww, so sweet!

Kawaii! I was a little worried that you were going to kill Shuichi, glad that wasn't the case.

aww! it was cute! i think you should make a sequel

*Tears of joy*
you put me to shame _

No longer a one-shot, but damn! You did good.

T.T awwwwwww! Damn I am soooooo glad you didn't make this into something tragic! I would have totally cried my eyes out! This is sooooo sweet even with all the sadness in the beginning! I LOOOOOOVED this! Loved this!

awwwwww cute

this was a sad yet nice story ] I'm glad I read it ]

wow but that's it no fair please tell me is there a sequel