Smut smut smut smut smut smut!

I am so glad I read this.. Never thought of FemPyro looking that way..

trans woc pyro is SO important

I love this more than you could imagine, 'Lola' was my favorite song when I was little!

I like this story honestly. I never thought of pyro being black, but I think that's how most people should describe her. I honestly also do not know why... O.o

Normally I'm not a huge fan of the "Pyro is a girl" theory but because of you I think I might be starting to like it.

oooo~ You have gotten my interest! Love your Pyro, seriously. I just might draw her.

So... freaking... cute... *dies of diabetes from cuteness*

Absolutely loved it. Can't even express *about to explode from cuteness... again*

Please regard me kindly~! *bows*

-Mandy

Wow this is a pretty cool Pyro. Could you write more stuff with her in it? Or could you draw her?

A verry nice story I've listened to Lola by the Kikns and that got me wondering about the last line.

To me the last line in your story could mean:

Scout is glad that he is a man and Pyro is glad that scout is a man too.

OR

Scout is glad that he is a man and Pyro is also a man.

Could you clarify wheter Pyro was supposed to be fe/male or did you leave it intentionally ambiguous? (and even if you'r leaving it ambiguous what's the truth?)

That was excellently, excellently executed. And yanno what? I put on the song while I read (mein gott, I love that song), and the lines and references matched almost perfectly.

Multiple wins on multiple levels.

Well done!

Aw... _

This is REALLY SWEET. :D Dunno whether they are RED or BLU team , but I actually love that it isn't even mentioned (as far as I can recall), because it is not relevant to the story, and we readers can choose for ourselves...

"Sequels" would be nice/ BTW, whichever team they are; it might be nice to see the "other (color also perhaps unmentioned) team" included on occasion; maybe even in some clandestine "forbidden romance" or something... but that's just me; don't let me unduly influence your writing muse. XD

Beautifully written. Both Pyro and Scout's characterizations are believable and likable, and their relationship is well-paced; not too fast and not too slow. Though the part concerning possible pregnancy confused me; you introduced the danger but then it was gone in like 2 sentences, so unless you're planning on writing another chapter...

Ah well, well done. I enjoyed this fic immensely.

Aw, I like it! Good story. x 3

HA it's awesome!