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OMG?! Marco's a sadist and I'm a masochist?! Nice

-MDW

I don't normally favorite this types of stories but ... you'll be the exception.

Usually I don't read nor like Cannon-Character/Reader stories, but you made me into a believer.

It was a good story and the plot was interesting enough for a one-shot. I liked how you mainly focused on that one torture scene instead of spreading out series of events in a short amount of time.

You're Marco was interesting, if not a bit too interesting in the Reader (though, I am guilty of liking that aspect :P). I would love to read a story where "your" Marco can show a bit more character since this one-shot only shows a small snippet.

Thanks for the story and Kudos to you! :D

BEST FANFICTION EVER!
I an really serious, this the best of all...and believe me that i had read so many storys for One Piece.
When i heard the song for the fist time i could feel everything that Rihanna was saying and it is the same with this fanfiction too.I can feel everything and the main characters are so HOTTT!
So with two words i would said...PERFECTLY AWESOME!

This story was one of the best stories a read and better yet Marco stories I've read! I had chill pratically down my back reading this and you make Marco sound so HU~OTTTTT! this story is on my favorites!

~Turksishcracker

This is really amazing! Its descriptive and just plain awesome~ My friend recommended me this. I dont like Marco like how my friend does, but she wanted me to read it and it was a pleasure for my eyes~ w

You have a lot of short sentences, but other than that, Keep up the good work~

I want to read the next chapter. I hope you do update

Oh god... I was shivering all over. This was so good. Unbelievable! The setting, the situation, I could really feel it while reading this. And, GOD, Marco *drools* I love the way you wrote it, it was more than amazing. I can't wait for the next game x)

XD

As I said on LJ, I loved it! Loved it loved it!

This was a very interesting one shot. Me liked it a lot :)

THIS is the hottest thing i ever read about Marco and i just signed up for this review. Sweety, you HAVE TO continue this or make a part two cause every last drop of this fiction leaked of sexiness and all that tension was amazing!

Great job!