very nice, I really liked it!

That's so sweet! : )

Cute. Loved it. ]

This was incredibly sweet! I loved it! It's just how I imagined both of the characters would react.

This was really good... I must congragulate you on your spelling and grammar; many people mess it up a lot.

Good job, Lioness! What another interesting take on the characters and this challenge! I loved the way you wrote the characters coming together, and the descriptions were really, really cute. I thought the transformation from her shyness and Yamini propriety to this scene was perhaps a little too quick for one night (and no wine, lmao) but I still loved it.

KrisEleven~

kinda cute