I think Douglas Coupland, having parodied himself in his own novel, would get quite a chuckle from this!

What a great clincher for a last line!

Just re-read this. Honestly the best fan-fic I’ve ever read and I’m deeply upset that I’ll never get to read where you could of taken this series :(

3 chapters in and it's still too twilight/midnight sun.

It bothers me that Edward isn't bothered when bella is upset. She has snapped at him several times because hes...pretty douchie and he doesn't even think about it...not even a mention in his mind.

And in walks Adrian ivashkov and bella asked HIM! Oh that would be perfect!

I wish Bella was alittle more human...the whole waiting for her mate even though shes human and not a vampire thing really isn't believable. In real life, she'd make out with mike. He would slobber so she would move on to the next guy...JAKE!

Rose's angelic sigh RENT him from his anguish? LOL

First off I doubt that Edward thinks that Roses sigh is fucking ANGELIC. And obviously "rent" needs to fixed.

I feel like this is a great place to have Bella move the fuck on. If some dude ignores you for a month...fuck him, ya know?

Is this gonna be exactly like twilight? Cause if so I'll just read the fucking book. All the extra shit so far isn't even interesting or needed.

I really don't know if I've reviewed before.
I hope you're still interested in writing this fanfic. It's actually one of my favorites.
I am trying to write my own, and seeing how much you wrote is such an inspiration.
Chapter 38 needs to be uploaded soon because I have been waiting years... Literally.

So much a fantastic story! So well written! So much a huge disappointment to get this far and learn it's not finished! I know other things in life pull at us, but vampires don't die so we have to continue their stories so get after it LOL. I seriously pray that you'll be moved to finish. I will however try some of your other writings I'm sure they are excellent you

Carlisle is channeling Obi Wan Kenobi now!?

I was always shaking my head over "Bad Vampires crash Baseball Game". #1 bella's is the ONLY heartbeat for FREAKIN' MILES. How the everlovin' HELL did ANYONE think they were going to hide her from the other vampires!? I really don't enjoy the book or the movie from this point until the Ballet Studio, because the premise of the plot device is so shoddy. thanks for having the guts to deviate from Canon for this. Howerver, having Bella climbing trees (I KNOW, Edward actually did the work, but STILL!) and messing around Hot Springs in a LONG SKIRT!? no, JUST NO! but that's the only thing about your version that I don't like. Except for this: If I'm not mistaken, Angela had already accepted Eric's invitation to the dance BEFORE Edward advised Ben to ask her, right?

Kissing is why Eclipse is my FAVORITE Twilight book. They kiss A LOT more in Eclipse that in the previous two books combined. That said, that KISS in the Twilight movie... Dear GOD! That had to be the hottest kiss in movie history. *fans self in remembered bliss* I'll always regret coming so late to the Twilight party that I didn't see any of them in the theater. I'm GLAD that I didn't see BD 2 in the theater: you should have heard me screaming at the TV when I saw the "battle scene" and Aro takes off Carlisle's head! I remember hollering, "Someone better damn well be DREAMING this..." I was ready to put a beatdown on SOMEONE, let me tell you!

BUSTED! Bad Boy, Bad Boy whatcha gonna do when they come for you? The smell: either she's on her period ("not supposed to play") OR she's aroused, hence the tossing and turning. Either way, she won't tell Bust-ward why she is so restless.