okay, the picture of them both in a tub is probably the best ending ever. except that i miss the klling rayborn part and jacks work and stuff. this would have been awesome to read i would imagine. although it's a very easy out, this is totally fine with me that way, too. :)

oh so enormeously well written! can't get enough of this, it's really like a drug. but so wonderful

oooh this is so fucking exciting, i'm so on my toes right now. heavy shit

SARAH! ooh so good. i couldn't appreciate your choice of name while reviewing your 'Sarah'-story, but this time it comes so oddly surprising that i just had to laugh out loud.
and please tell me you/them would name a son Damian :)

soo funny! so cool

you're addressing his and her demons in a way that gets me to my knees. so wonderful

wow, this is another matter to slove for these two. both of them so wild in each very individual way.. you show it absolutely great

you just manage to dig so fucking deep with every part of your story, it's amazing. this one especially. I'm so over the moon about this dialogue, i can't begin telling you

you're killing me here with their beautiful interactions and gestures and diaglogues. honestly

oh shit, oh wow, this story will smash me down, i can feel it. but "what a way to die" right :). so beautifully written

soo fucking good, so much charlie and dani purely. why weren't you a writer on the show? it's so unfair

oh this was hot, so hot and so beautifully in character!

their case work is fantastic, and now dani in the center from his perspective is something i really like

i love the way you take your time with each step and every part of their development. it's exactly what i was hoping :) and i loove how much chapters this story has. so very promising.

ooh the car, that silver cadillac. shit, this is going to get exciting i'd bet