Omg! I know I'm insanely late, but if it's not too much to ask, please finish this!

I love ur story!:)plz plz plz plz plz post more I want to know more! Thnx for writing

WHY DID YOU STOP UPDATING?! D:
Every time I find a good fanfiction, they're never finished! Ugh! You said on your bio on APRIL 1ST 2011 THAT YOU WOULD UPDATE "the truth". Today is SEPTEMBER 10th 20-freaking-12 and you still haven't updated? What kind of cruel heartless person are you? Ok, done with the rant now, although I'm still very upset.
I LOVE this story! I always wondered what it would be like if they all escaped D12. You stay fairly true to the characters, which I like. (and can be hard to find in fanfiction). Aww I love how you have Madge liking (but not really admitting it to herself) Gale. I'm very interested in why Matza burned peeta's house in the first place. Could he really hate his brother enough to kill him? It bugs me how the Mellarks think that Peeta left THEM. He was in the friction Hunger Games! He nearly died in an excruciating way, watched what must have been one of the longest and most painful death in the games (Cato) and then found out that his one true love who he thought loved him back was faking it the entire time. I mean COME ON. Annie went completely insane after her games, you have to cut Peeta some slack. Anyways I really like this story and I hope that you keep writing it or I will be dreadfully upset. Btw, I'm a Christian too! Just thought I should mention that. I always live seeing other believers writing. (you see, my dad is a Christian literary agent. So finding out that the writer of one of my favorite fanfictions is a christian is always a plus ;) )
Anyways PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!¡!

one question. WHERE IS KATNISS?

Your writing style is almost exactly like Suzzane Collins's, and I like it. You should try writing some book ideas that you came up yourself(wouldn't recommend posting them here without a copywrite)maybe you could get it published, your a good writer and I like the fan fiction, I'll look forward to reading some of your other fan fictions.

Are there going to be more chapters? I hope so!(:

This was a very unique the of the story, I have to admit there was a point in the story when I wanted

You should add more to this story! I wanna know what happens next!

So I'm confused. Was Katniss a hallucination the first time when she pointed behind Peeta to the dark thing that was also a hallucination? But then she was real when Haymitch was talking to her? And the fence didn't really shut off but he didn't feel any pain and then had a hallucination of her while he was dead?

I know you finished this more than a year ago, but I was wandering around the HG section of this site and came across this story. It took me a couple days to read, but I loved it.

Gale & Peeta are hilarious as friends..but I'm glad they're getting now, although Katniss is with Peeta.

Great job :)

I have waited since August, and youve had a long enough hiatus! UPDATE:) it would make my day to see a chapter 48 in the near future! U are so incredibly gifted, plz dont let your talent slip away xD

Gah, I feel like a mean person for saying this...and I seriously, seriously don't intend to be-I give constructive criticism the best I can, and I really hope you don't take it the wrong way.

But I would say...no, you didn't salvage it. Mainly because it kind of comes off as an old author's trick: when an author writes him/herself into a corner, they throw in a character death, or a disaster, or something dramatic for absolutely no reason at all, just to get the plot moving back again.

Things don't have to be happening all the time in the snappy, action sort of way. Sit back, relax, try a little introspection and character development. Everyday things.

I would try focusing on what he is trying to do to get over her, and why he can't. She can keep coming up and causing that not to happen, but I think he needs to have some sort of attempt to get over her beyond throwing himself into a fence.

Going into the realm of the personal here, when I was getting over my emotionally abusive ex, I did some really stupid things. I got drunk off of bad German vodka, I went on a shopping spree (though that is very much a girl thing lol) sat in bed and ate two gallons of ice cream and had a RvB marathon, and finally threw out everything of his that he left behind.

Just ya know...throwin' some stuff out there.

Okay, now I'm really, really confused. I would suggest going back and clarifying this in some way, because it's not clear at all. Like, for instance, when Katniss said he died, the only thought in my brain was "whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat?"

And more in a disbelief way than in an emotionally devastating way-you could do to use a touch more emotion, if you want to play up the drama here. And I know "use more emotion" is generally a bs phrase people use when they are trying to think of something to criticize, but this time I actually do mean it. Leave us with a little suspense, a little poetry, a little build-up.

Aww, short chapter! D8

Of course, that means I immediately have to read the next one. ;D

Because the ending of this has me on edge for a -squee- fest. &hearts &hearts &hearts

Don't worry; it doesn't suck.

Though I'm sure 45 chapters from here you are already well aware of that. But thus far, I do like what you have, though dare I breathe the words that Peeta seems a bit over the top...lost? Like...almost...blarg I hate this word but...emo?

Don't get me wrong, I think you've capture his way of thinking and speaking, and god knows I've had my heart broken before but...yeah, thus far it seems to be a bit much. And I seriously don't mean that in a mean or offensive way or anything; I intend to read the rest because you have me intrigued.

I really like the idea of Prim coming to visit him, though. I would have never thought of that before, but it's very sweet, and original. :)