OMG Korea is a stalker! :O

XDXDXD KOREA YOU IDIOT BUT I LOVE YOU ALL THE SAME XDXDXD

First part of the chapter: Ninjas orignated in Korea~daze!

Later: Japans breast belong to Korea~daze!

God I love South Korea -.

... and then he declared independence

"and returned with three bowl of white rice, each with chop sticks sticking out of the bowl" Having the chop sticks stuck into the bowl/leaning on the edge/sticking up is considered a faux pas in Japan. And I'm pretty sure most Asian countries that use chop sticks are the same. This is because having the chop stick upright like that resembles incense sticks burned in memory of the dead, and so putting your chopsticks like that brings bad luck/is disrespectful to your ancestors/invites bad spirits/shouldn't be done. The 'proper' way is to put them together and have them resting flat across one side on the edge of the bowl/plate/whatever you're eating on. Just a random bit of trivia. Not that you'd ever be expected to know that xD just one of those many, many minute and complicated rules of Japanese courtesy.

"the brain obeyed his hearts wishes and invigorated" I don't think "invigorated" is quite the word you're looking for. The dictionary does say "to fill someone or something with life", but it's not really like that. If I felt refreshed, ready to go, motivated, full of life, I'd say "I feel invigorated!". If someone were to say "I am invigorating" it would mean that being around them would make people feel refreshed and motivated, not that they are doing an action called invigorating. "I am invigorating" is more similar in structure to "I am beautiful" than "I am running". It's not really a verb, more than an adverb. I don't know what word you should use instead, probably "resumed function", or "restarted", or "rebooted". I hope that made some sort of sense... .

"words had to be arranged in the right patterns lest you send the wrong massage" How about "message"? LOL though bad massages are apparently unhealthy, and can cause actual damage. Don't get a full-body massage by anyone but a certified masseur or masseuse!

"He only sleeps and gets angry at Turkey for no apparent reason. (Turkey isn't all that bad of a person.)" Why are there brackets? Also, if they were meant to be there, it's generally accepted that punctuation goes outside the bracket.

""Yes." He rasped" When you have dialogue, and it ends in a period, and what follows is a description, the period should be changed to a comma, and the description should not have a capital letter. The correct way would be "Yes," he rasped". Two paragraphs down, you have ""Well, that's a relief." Greece slipped out from under the furniture and stood to full height. ... "I was wondering when I would be allowed to move." Greece continued" The first part is correct, because "Greece slipped out from under the furniture" is a sentence by itself and not describing the dialogue previously. The second part is incorrect, because "Greece continued" is describing how he said the previous dialogue. So it should be ""I was wondering when I would be allowed to move," Greece continued".

"pressed his lips gently on Japan's" Missing a period on the end.

I love this idea, so original! I can't say I've read much fanfiction with the Asians, but I'm certainly looking forward to this one! And Sealand as Puck? Squeee! But let me get this straight... Germany and Italy are Theseus and Hippolyta... Japan and Greece are Helena (or maybe Hermia, I can never remember which name goes to which girl) and Lysander, China and Korea are Demetrius and Hermia... Japan's boss is Perseus? Or whatever Helena's father's name is... But you changed it a bit, I see, because Germany wasn't the one to give the "Demetrius or celibacy" ultimatum. Ohhh, can't wait to see who Oberon and Titania are! And the fairy helpers... Cobweb, Peasblossom and... I forget. Oh, and Bottom! Bottom's always hilarious. My sister played Titania in the play this year, so cool! I made her fairy wings, and as thanks she forced me to be the mannequin for making her dress. She is a devil with those pins, I tell you, a devil. Noooo, we can't use safety pins, we're making a dress so must therefore use traditional sewing pins that have SHARP AND POINTY ENDS!

*Ahem*

Anyways, this story is a pleasure so far! Good job! ;)

Ah, it's three in the moring, I'm currently listening to Norwegian music, and one of my many cats is curled up next to me on my couch. ... Or at least she was. I love how this is turning out! Keep it up!

DUN DUN DUN GREECE IS IN LOVE WITH THE WRONG PERSON AAAAAAAAAH. lol at poor Korea. The dream sequence was really interesting, especially with the Greek mythology. I can't wait to see donkeyPrussia!

You know whats odd? I've seen fics before...lol

Ah, but this is starting to get really interesting :D

x3 can't wait for next update! ;P

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sorry for such a fail review ;o; OTL

I don't know why, but I find it really funny that Greece fell asleep at the wheel. Imagine what anyone driving by him would think if they saw that XD Dun Dun Dun SEALAAAAAAAAAND AND THE FLOWERRRRRRRRRR.

sealandddd, what did you doooo DX

Holy shiz he went to Jared LMFAO.

lol Sealand as Puck, saw that one coming. All and all a fantastic story and parody. More people should write parodies/crossovers.

And FINALLY someone who doesn't pair china and russia in EVERY freaking story! Now I have found someone who also ships china and korea! you make me so happy! *happy squeaky noise of happy* (because personally i love russiaxcanada ;))

Anyway keep up the good work!

xD o no... I see something horrible comming up in the next chapters...! I get the feeling peter shouldnt have given francis that flower lol ohhhhh i cant wait to see what happens next! Please update soon~

I love how you keep the basic plot of the original, but this fic is original in itself C: Awww I feel so much for Korea. And I immediately realized who Sealand mistook Korea for XD

OH GOD PLEASE DON'T TELL ME CHINA FALLS IN LOVE WITH THE WRONG PERSON. LOL SEALAND YOU HOPELESS FOOL.

I really like reading this story - this story totally needs more reviews! It's so funny and really makes me want to read Midsummer Night's Dream even more! Maybe I'll get my drama teacher to make that next year's play C:

But really, I can't wait for the next chapter! :D