These are so cute! I'll definitely be reading these till "Z" finishes!

soul, soul, soul... Hopelessly in love!

Oh my, I was smiling throughout this whole chapter! It was absolutely adorable! I can't help but wonder though if Soul did that just so he wouldn't have to stand under the umbrella anymore lol. I can't wait for the next chapter! Until then~

Aww, that was too cute! X) Especially Soul's reaction to Maka's pink umbrella

Clover-chan!

First of all, Happy New year!

How are ya? And, still you are awesome!XD

soooo beautiful and cute!

I like this fanfiction a lot . The only thing I notice is that Soul seems a little bit sappy/sensitive in most of them, but otherwise all the characters seem accurate. I guess to make short oneshots Soul has to warm up to confessing more easily *shrug* But really, I like this!

Lololol shes having such a deep inner monologue and tgen soul has to ruin it by saying "tiny tit". I literally laughed out loud and now my parents are giving me strange looks

It was a good shot :) At this point I'm a connoisseur of all things citrusy, so I have rather high standards for lemons. This was a good starting point though; you managed to convey a little tenderness and emotion, which is good. Soul's attitude seemed more juvenile than sensual, but that's alright. I would suggest you continue working on further developing the mental and emotional connections in your lemons, and think about writing them with texture and sound- you should be able to feel it, ya know? Also, read M rated fics in this category- if you haven't found it already, I would suggest "Amplify" by Marsh of Sleep. It's by far the best M rated SoMa I've read, and doesn't feel too dirty or anything; there's brilliant subtlety and story progression, along with immaculate writing skills.

Above all, it was enjoyable and I urge you to continue writing and exploring your writing _ You know what they say, when life gives you lemons, make lemonade.

I will be waiting anxiously to taste your lemonade lol :)

So far this is my favorite. I really, really enjoyed this one. _ Keep up the good work!

So this was cute :) There were a couple errors; you misused "disdain"... perhaps you meant "disappointment"? Also, I can't help but feel that it's spelled as "cantible". I could be completely wrong about the spelling, but it just seems wrong... Otherwise very enjoyable. Nice job, and please continue writing :)

I am a big fan of this story, are your gonna continue it? You sorta stopped at the letter T, plz say ur gonna continue it, it is so sweet!

Soo cute, I love it! Pls update more~

wow you are a talented writer, you make me so jealous

oh, your writing is so beautiful, it was soooooo creative of you to do this abc sorta thing, i am looking forward to more