I just went to add this to my story alerts and then looked up and went "COMPLETE? NO!" A shame I really liked it and think that it has potential to be a longer story if you so choose ;) Really enjoyed it!

loving this girly!

it's off to a strong start. i mean i know you're just getting the ball rolling right now and haven't delved into the plot just yet but you've set up matt's situation and perspective very nicely and the chapter was refreshingly devoid glaring gramatical mistakes. i look forward to seeing where this goes.

loved it! The last paragraph made me misty eyed. On a side note I'm working on some random stuff for our story I have no idea where the stuff will go or even if we'll use it but oh well... anyways great job!