Thats way to short T.T

Sweet, simply sweet... care to eloberate in a longer FF?

I actally liked it a lot... It was very cute and I adore how shy Mitsuhiko gets, I think that is amazing, not only that but when I was reading it, I could picture the scene happening, and I love that when I read a story, so you did an excellent job! Keep on writing! :)

That turned out much more cute than I expected! I have to admit, I wasn't too sure about it when I clicked it, but you did a nice job! Just a couple grammar and punctuation mistakes I noticed, but other than that, good work.

Cool or something. It wasn't horrible by any means.