I'm excited to read the next few chapters- I want to see Sirius start to get underneath her skin, hahaha, keep up the good writing! )

oo interesting story line. i can't wait to read more :] keep up the good work!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! :D

Loved. The. Ending.

Poor, Maria :( She's always got so many thoughts racing through her mind and it doesn't help that Draco is there at every turn. I like the idea of them together, but at the same time I love her and Sirius. It's strange, but maybe Maria and dark, mysterious men just go together.

I really hope Dumbledore has some answers about her past because every chapter I'm finding myself more curious as to what has brought her to where she stands today.

Loved this chapter and can't wait for more :)

:) d'aw, you're welcome :D (Sorry I'm so late with this one, holiday's and exams!)

But I really like this little clip, it really shows the storm in Draco's mind and I love knowing what goes on in character's minds. And, god, I just love Draco. Okay?

On another note, darkness excites me :D and I'm looking forward to the rest of the story :)

Okay, you got a new reader in me. I have to say that I love this story so far. It's really not like the others I've read and I can already tell that I will be looking for updates constantly.

I really like when OCs are complex. More than they appear. And I am definitely looking forward to how Draco, Maria, Sirius, and Harry are going to play out in this.

Keep writing.

Yay yuor back

woooooo

im rather liked this chapter

i wonder who she'll choose cuz 1's dead and 1 she doesn't realise she was in love with

and im babling sorry

well done yay i thought you had abandoned the story

It makes me very sad that you haven't got more reviews for this story and the first part. I don't understand it, myself - mabe it's just horrible people like me who read and never bother to review. But I'm reviewing now, so.. :D

I love this. I really do. And not just because my name is Becky either, though that's kind of cool. I normally hate OCs with a passion, but the character you've created actually seems to fit perfectly into the world. I think she's a really good character, actually. I mean, I like her, which is rare enough. The point is that she's believable, and she fills a gap in the HP world that I'd never noticed before.

I know the chapters are short, but I actually kind of like it. It means there are no annoyingly long paragraphs of prose, just enough to make it real, but without the rambling.

As you may be able to see, I am Queen of the ramblers.

Anyway. What I'm trying to say is that I really, really like this story. And that I'll be staying hooked. So thanks for writing this, because I;ve really enjoyed it.

Keep writing! I'm excited for the next update :)

Musings, aka Becky.

Okay, I can't wait for the prequel.

I love this story and the one before it, but Sirius is such a wonderful character and I love the way you write him that I just can't contain my enthusiasm; but illtry ;)

This chapter had me hanging on every word, waiting to see what the next move would me.

And this was a great chapter. I can't wait to know what happens next :)

Ah, I love those heated kisses that come out of disagreements. ;)

I loved this chapter.

I love that Maria has weaknesses and I live seeing Draco's weaknesses and burdens drawn out. The two really do go together even if she is married to Sirius. ;D

Looking forward to the next!

Hello again :)

You nailed Snape's character. It was awesome.

And I really love the stubborness of Maria. I imagine she inherited that from her father (considering the books don't give us that much insight into Tom Riddles character)

I can't wait to see what happens next now that Draco is making an appearance :D

Yayy! I've missed you so much D

It's so great to be back in Becky's mind.

I really love the plot you've built up and the tension that's been created, not just between Becky and Draco, but it seems that everyone worth mentioning has some sort of tension building up and it's wonderful because you know that at some point it has to explode XD

Oh, I also love whatever the hell is goig on between Malfoy and Sinclair ;D

I love it just as much as the first one! It's so awesome! It's fantastical! I love, love, love it. It may be even -better- than the first one!

Ah-haha-awesome. I really don't like Pansy much...but I like Becky...and Draco. Oh, for dialogue it should be like this,

"That wretched new girl, Sinclair," finished the blonde...

With a comma and a lowercase.

I did that for a really long time though, so don't think it's just you.

Really cool chapter. This story is great and I'm not just saying that.

And the plot thickens once again...how exciting.

I love the addition of Pansy to complicate Draco's life even more; it's perfect. And you made Pansy the right kind of annoying, I mean she's still that kind of annoying you just want to kick to the side but she isn't nearly the 'pull your hair out in frustration everytime her face appears' kind of character. She is balanced perfectly between Draco and Maria's relationship and I can see her as becoming a threat just because she doesn't have that total dependency on Draco like we're led to believe.

So, summarized, it means you're incredible with the characters and that this chapter was amazing ]

I can't wait for the next!