this is one of the best vamp stories I have read in awhile. congratulations on #5 in the Twifanfic top ten stories. that is where I found your story. I hope you continue to write. thank you for sharing

thanks for this awesome story.. well captured.. loved the bella edward scenes.. the anguish.. woah! my heart just melted

this chapter was such an eye opener for both characters. This is what the original books needed to make them a much better books. You show how much growth not only Bella goes through in this chapter but the growth that Edward goes through also.

Amazing chapter.

I really enjoyed this story especially the deeper conversations between Bella and Edward and she didnt let him hide.
Wonderful conclusion!

Loved this story! Great writing and characters. I love how you didn't gloss over the emotional pain of abuse. Great job!

This story was truly a pleasure to read. Thank you so much.

This is always going to be my favourite fanfic... 3

Oh Lisa what a beautiful ending of the story! The transition point at twilight was just perfect.
And i like the idea of making love in a thunderstorm, you described the scene very nice.
I'm going to miss this story so so much!

You really have a great talent and i'm so glad to see that there are coming more stories (of Twilight).
Thank you so much for sharing this. I will definitely reread.

Love, Vera

I am also sobbing in a corner now. Such a beautiful ending. I haven't been here since the beginning, but I'm thankful I found my way here at the end. Amazing work!

This was such a sweet chapter. I wish smeyer would've shown a vulnerable Edward like you have. Honestly, 10/10. I appreciate your story telling, and the way you have handled a sensitive subject so far. I'm not done with this story yet, but I already look forward to reading more of your work.

I'm interested to see how Jake is going to hide what he did from the pack. Surely they wouldn't condone his actions.

It would be so good to read a sequel to this but I understand that for you this is the perfect ending. I just found this story yesterday and just couldn’t stop reading it. I’ve went through a similar situation to Bella and even now I still get moments of memories surfacing and being unable to cope but I know that scars do get easier to bare and I’m so happy hers will in time. Thank you for writing this and I look forward to any future twilight stories. If you by chance have an recommendations for stories with a similar concept please let me know.

This is so nice, i see you finished the story!

I love this chapter, so much is in it. After reading it i'm feeling sad for both, not only Bella. But i also love how far these two have come. I can't wait to see how they are making it right again.

(I'm very late to read the last chapters of this story, i did not forget about you! The corona virus hit my family very hard so i had to take a pause).

An extraordinary story, beautifully written. This is one the sweetest, kindest, most complex Edwards I’ve read — and letting us see Bella realize how lonely and exhausting and painful Edward’s “gift” (because now I can’t help but think if it that way) has been for him, all these years. I don’t think anything I’ve read has conveyed the burden he has carried quite so well. Thank you so much for finishing!

Thank you so much for coming back and finishing the story. I only just found it for the first time a couple days ago, so I didn't have the wait that many of your readers did, but even if I had, the wait would have been worth it. This story was amazing, one of the best I've read.

I especially appreciated the realistic characterizations of Bella and Edward, that didn't bounce back from the trauma immediately and easily, but it also wasn't over-the-top angsty. Their journey to healing, learning to be honest with themselves and each other, and even dealing with issues in their relationship that had already been present but ignored, was incredibly well written.

I'm looking forward to reading anything else that you write!