I am a middle aged straight woman and I love this story. The beautiful way you write these scenes is so perfect, I can feel the emotion so deeply, it's amazing. Love it, I have read this story many times in the last 12 years and it always makes me feel warm and fuzzy. Perfection.

you uld think he makes big bucks, how come he can't at least help Jasper with his own personal money?

wow read some of this but will now finish

too bad you never finished this

I just read the first chapter only to realise that it isn’t finished, if your not going to finish stories then please don’t start. I’m not reading anymore sorry but

Kay I'm screaming into my hands right now. No big deal at all. Just grinning my little heart out. It's fine

I really hope you continue this story sometime soon!

He should have been clear with Peter, he knows Edward loves him, and he should have realized Peter wanted Jasper to take the watch off because Peter knew it came from Edward, and calling another man baby, wow that's cold

Jasper needs to end this now, he's with Edward and he's already ready to break Edward's heart. No mixig business with pleasure with more than one client. He needs to be honest with Peter

Just ruined another chapter. Totally turned me off. Why oh why can't that fuckrr stay away.

I skilled the whole chapter, can't stand the "I have no respect for other people's boundaries, so I'll just show up whenever I fucking please" cause I'm just such a charmer. Let Edward have a three-way with anyone but that slut.

BTW, a threesome doesn't bother me, I just hate Riley, and I wish he would disappear, OD or something, yeah, I hate him that much. I have a former friend who is a druggie, stole from me, destroyed property. Brought a trick into my home while I was at Dr office, and then assaulted him. Skank is in jail now, thankfully.

I just stopped when Riley cane in, just can't stand him, and why jasper doesn't have the fucking brains to ask who's at the door and keep the lock on is beyond me. I think Jasper has long since paid his debt, whatever the fuck it is, a long time ago.

I had to skip over parts of this, okay a lot, I can't believe Jasper is using his endearment for Edward on Peter, and he knows peter is falling for him, he needs to break it off. I don't care about Peter, I just know what he's going to do to Edward. Very unfair and selfish of him. He can tell Tanya things are getting to personal with Peter. Guess he just can't give up the ego boost, between Peter and Edward, and annoying Riley on the side Jasper must feel like king of escorts. All these men wanting him unconscionable IMHO

Yeah, can't read this one, father is a fucking self centered asshole, this is like arranged marriages between rich families, it doesn't matter what Edward wants, as long as it works for the family business, Edward is the sacrificial lamb. Carlisle is an asshole, and Esme is not much better. I gagged through this chapter once. Once was ten times too many.