| Reviews for Love, A Disorder |
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Gomizia chapter 10 . 5/28/2018 oh, why oh why aren't you updating? This is one of the best dark gaahina fics i've ever read. Please do consider updating. Your work is too good to be left unfinished :( |
Gomizia chapter 8 . 5/28/2018 holy shit that was hot. that was a very well-written kiss scene! |
Gomizia chapter 4 . 5/28/2018 hit. smile. hit. smile. holy shit! |
Gomizia chapter 3 . 5/28/2018 wow this is very, very interesting. i love your characterizations on the characters. I can see Road To Ninja Hinata in Raku. |
UrbanWonderland chapter 10 . 11/15/2013 Well shit man i've finally found a story worthy of my praise (heh i sound like a prick). I love this story so goddamn much. 3 If you needed help with anything about the hospital I suppose it wouldn't be too troublesome to give you some tips... 1. no smoking (which is total shit) 2. there are usually always at least one nurse in the room 3. you can't go out wherever you want though it would be damn awesome 4. injections to calm a patient down are usually injected in the ass... (no lies its called booty juice) and 5. there isn't a fridge (but i do love that you have that in your story) you only get three meals and a snake o.o snack* and sometimes if you have a nice nurse they get you shit from a vending machine... any-whore hope that helped if it didn't then shit... i wasted like five of my minutes. Anyways this story is goddamn amazing I finally found someone who curses as much as me :') I am interested what did neji do to piss raku off so much? Also where the hell is neji?! he like fell of the fucking face of the earth... oh well. Well i hope you update soon. ;o; well my rambling is getting troublesome... i am curious also why is shikamaru in the hospital? he doesn't really seem mental patient worthy (no offense shika) unless you already told us why and i am just being stupid (which i probably am but what the hell) anyways peace out -Matty |
Guest chapter 2 . 9/5/2013 Please tell me that Hinata doesn't smoke by herself and has another personality somewhere in their. |
AllyKatButterfly chapter 10 . 2/22/2011 Hey I love your story after the very first chapter you got me hooked! I only have a few questions, alright better start at number one... might seem wierd if i statt at number two...hehe 1. what did neji do to hinata? 2. Does Hinata already know about Gaara's 'problems'? 3. Can you PLEASE...PRETTY PLEASE WITH CHERRY ON TOP finish this story it's got me hooked. your writing style is good maybe a bit unedited but so are many others and trust me when i say your english is so much better then theirs is because half the time im reading some im editing the sentences in my head and finding myself not even able to edit it properly love your work! |
TooBlueForYou chapter 10 . 1/23/2011 REALLY AWESOME FIC. It's so interesting; I totally love it all. And why no update? *cries* This fic totally deserves more reviews; when I saw how much reviews you only had... I was quite shocked. You derseve more reviews. Update soon! |
Marrow365 chapter 10 . 12/29/2010 Ok I love this story. It is slightly freaking me out, but that makes it all the mire interesting to read. I like the whole inner demon thing with Gaara and a bit with Hinata. I like how you have the bipolar thing going on with Hinata, because it kinda reminds me of how in the series Sakura has another half that shows what she is really wanting to do. What did Neji do to Hinata to make she feel that way towards him? Yes I wrote too much but I just have a lot of things to talk about with this. Please continue to write more of this story for I must know what will happen to all the characters. |
Marrow365 chapter 4 . 12/29/2010 I love this. Most can't have difficulty writing fights but this was very well done |
SunaNoGaara chapter 10 . 6/19/2010 This story is so fucking good *_* |
TheGreenElephant911 chapter 10 . 6/5/2010 Nice story. Gaara and Hinata crack me up, for some odd reason. Don't know why... But I hope to see more! This interests me to no end and I like how all their "disorders" fit them. |
newts chapter 10 . 3/16/2010 This is beautifully written and one of a kind. However, I would like to add that there is a section of a chapter that doesnt make sense. Where Gaara chokes Hinata, she is in a straight jacket. Suddenly she doesnt have one and is free to pursue her attacker. Also, as a side note, the mental hospital seems a little too cozy. You could always see it more as a rehab center. I have had worse issues with my fanfiction, so please dont take this as an insult. Again, this is lovely and very realistic! Ami |
ArtistOfBlue chapter 10 . 3/16/2010 it would be interesting to see how Sasuke feels about all this. Although I do like GaaHina fluff, just reading that chapter made me wonder 'hmm how's does Sasuke feel about everything... and was it a coincidense that he found Sakura...?' Well, can't wait till the next chap! :) |
Number1Weirdo chapter 10 . 3/16/2010 Well you know me, I just love stating the obviouse. p I liked this chapter beacause you got to see more of the ppl around Hinata than actually Hinata herslef. Nice. |