A bit ghastly but amusing. Sarah has really gone.a bit psycho.

I needed a good laugh. thanks

Not shure if I should laugh ... or not

Moral dilemmas.

great story, well written like the use of karen gillan, miss pond herself.

They are becoming quite the strange couple, that's for sure... Nice addition to the AP Sarah storyline. Well done!

Ok, honestly, I can see Sarah going batsh*t crazy and killing every girl that even touches Chuck the wrong way, but saying "sexes me up"? I'm sorry, but I can't get that to work in my head. No offense or anything, but I can't picture Yvonne saying something like that, even as AP Sarah.

A little constructive criticism from a fellow writer/editor:

Sarah smiled. "I like it when Chuck rubs off on me. Of course, I like rubbing off on him, too."

"Ugh. You had to make it sound dirty, didn't you?"

"And by rubbing off on him I mean giving him a handjob."

Casey drew his weapon and pointed at Sarah, disgusted. "Stop it. Just stop it."

Sarah chuckled evilly as she continued to scan the main room. She flopped down on the couch and picked up a book from the coffee table. An album of Robert Frank photographs.

You could delete everything from "And by rubbing off..." to "Just stop it," and still have the scene work. The extra joke doesn't always have to be there. Just a suggestion.

I can see her skipping down the hall, though, since she seems to have regressed emotionally to a six-year-old.

Oh, God, she is not gonna try to take out a CIA-trained leggy Valkyrie of an assassin with an aversion to clothes and a penchant for punching people's tickets, is she?

Yes. Yes, she is. Sarah's gonna have quite the body count when she gets to Heaven.

Perfect homage to Weppy; well done.

Too many good quips. And poor Casey has to be subjected to all that crazy. Thanks for the laughs.

I read this several times and laughed throughout it each and every time. Great job with AP. She almost met her match, but she pulled out all of the stops and took down the threat. And might I mention, I love the turning of AP into a form of Latin? Adorabulus batshitcrazius. Haha. Further, I like how you tossed in a few incidentals like the three teenage girls at the theater. That's completely AP's way.

“Ever since you started inserting Bartowski’s Tab A into your Slot B…” Haha, now that was a great scene for interaction. Definitely hilarious. Hell, the whole thing is funny. Awesome ending too.

Very well done.

DK

Wow! Adorable Psycho is so awesome. This was so cool

My God, I love you. (But not like how your Adorable Psycho loves Chuck.) This was even better than Fight Night 2 - no, actually, they're both laugh-out-loud hilarious. I can't decide which one was better. All I know is, I laughed. A lot. I don't know how you do it, Liam. You shame us all with your witty comedy and superb placing of the beloved f-word. The ending was byfar the best ending ever - how could anyone NOT have corny Disney-esque music playing in their head after reading that?

And now it is 8:27, and I have a little more than half an hour to go until Chuck premieres here in lovely Northern California. Today's a great day. :)

Looking forward to Innocence!

loved it

Wow, this was so hilarious! Thanks, lol it was great. D

Adorable psycho Sarah is such fun to read and i am sure she was fun to write too. Really good adition to the AP universe

enjoyed it particularly the casey/sarah conversations love those double entendres

Now thats the sweet compassionate love story that I like!;-)