This story had such an intriguing premise. I wish I could have known more about their growing relationship :D

Hola, me gusto tu historia, espero encontrar más en tu perfil

I'm just happy about Ino and Deidara!

I liked it..Though i would have preferred it to be longer :D

Wow that was amazing sauce! Can't wait to read the next part

Lol how reckless of them.

Cool! XD

you really should make this have more than one chapter cause that was a cliff hanger plz keep writing plz

I'm so glad that you have a sequel to this story because I was about to say that you were so mean to leave us hanging after the encounter with Itachi and Sakura! This story is great, and I thought you portrayed Itachi well. Can't wait to start reading your sequel!

great

Great OS :)

ROLLING ON THE GROUND LAUGHING! THOUGHT IT WAS GREAT

HAHAHAH Itachi dressing up as a girl on a seduction mission! Genius! Very original:D

Thank you for sharing this piece(:

For a first to lemon I'd say it's pretty good. Though (if I'm getting my termonology right) I'd say it's more lime. And I love ItaSaku! One of my favorite Sakura pairings! Keep it up!

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Hi there :) nice story. I so understand what you mean when you say this was your first published lemon. I am still blushing when I remember the ones in my story. It's just so awkward :D especially when you know that some of your friends might read it.

Anyways I like the lemon and the setting very much. It might have been good if it was longer (for story the story to develope more) because after 20 minutes of making out it's not so plausible for Sakura to submit so easily and for Itachi for being so open but otherwise I enjoyed it! And I'm off reading some of your other stories :)