At the beginning of this story I have been a bit disturbed by the incest, but I like to read it anyway. It is really nicely written. Like the ending. And have been wandering if you would write some sequel with Kadaj and Cloud and others - Seph and Yazoo, how they managed to hide it... or about the reaction of others if they would find out :D

Oh we all know quite well that they are devious little liars! I wonder how they plan to carry on after all of this. Especially now that Vincent thinks it's over. XD

what about an epilogue, like 20 years later ? :)))

"Sephiroth was still wordlessly staring with a slightly accusing expression, as if Yazoo had just walked in on him masturbating.,,, which was probably not the best metaphor, as he really wouldnt have minded that." HAHA !

"He wished he could be in his own room, finishing that virus he was programming."

lool ! :D

oh that was the end ? :(

ummm at least, they are not giving up on the relationship, thats something ! :D

I hope this story makes the POINT about the immorality of incest. The story seems to be going somewhere very good, I just hope the ending takes the RIGHT turn...

GNXmike

Sneaky boys... Convincing their father that they won't be screwing behind their backs.

Much to smart for their own good.

Adorable 3

This chapter was brilliant ! Perfect ! :D it was incredibly cute and vivid and I had a big goofy smile on my face reading it :D Yazoo crying in the bathroom. Of all the things, I could never have thought of the reason why ! hahaha !

Thank you BaBe for a really delightful moment :D

I LOVE that story!

oh funny about grandpa Grim.. isnt it typical how people behave differently with their kids and their grandkids sometimes.. ?

That was a great flash back.

Oh dear, I guess I am one of those lurkers, mooching off of the joy a well- written story brings but never getting their asses into gear to drop a few lines in order to show their appreciation. Shame on me. Your story sure deserves praise!

I really love the interaction between those two beautiful brothers and it's so utterly adorable how Seph tries to be the reasonable one, even at the tender age of...how old is he in the last flashback? Six? Seven?

Strangely enough, I do not feel disturbed by the incestuous ways of the little ones because, hey... who is to judge true love? And who the hell said that close relatives may not get intimate with each other (Scientists aside...). I don't give a flying eff about what society decides is to be frowned upon. That's life and there are always those who don't fit the norm.

Aaaaalright. That was my Christmas rant. Feel free to ignore it :)

Best wishes to you and thanks for sharing this lovely piece of work.

oh, u'll finish it in the next chapter? Thats sad :(

I love this chapter! :D

ewww Kadaj is sooo cuuute .

fantastic! Omg, BMIK-san, u have many interesting idea! I'll go the next chapter nau!

Ah innocentish Zack. And Genesis who is collecting

pieces of the puzzle without trying. Something tells

me he will be the first to figure things out. Wonder

how Sephiroth's little band goes. At least we still

know Sephiroth is interested in Yazoo. Guess we'll

see where it'll end up next.