Brilliantly crafted and hopelessly sad. Very realistic. Well done.

This is a great story, good writing! I will read your sequels for sure. This story is about what really happens in this mixed up world, especially now when cops are being killed in cold blood, some rookies, some veterans.

So powerful

This story broke me. I'm just amazed by it (and frankly crying my eyes out right now). I know it's been a while since you wrote it, but this still deserves a review.

Oh my God, this is the best fanfiction I have ever read, and I've read a lot! I can't even put into words what makes this so great. NOT giving them closure was a brave decision, a brave route to take this story and the most realistic, devastating outcome possible. Thank you so much for this story!

This is the most eloquent of soul-murdering fics I have ever read...

Ok so how devestating was that! I can still feel the tears in the back of my troat!
Very nicely written though and I really hope you resolve her disapperance in the sequels.

That is so incredibly depressing. And extremely well written. You're very good at manipulating emotion.

This is amazingly written. Great job. I really love how you put this together. Not once having Olivia in it except in a flashback or in thoughts. I really liked that. It really pulled me and kept me reading. Great job.

Fantastic story. You're right, It's really different never getting any answers but it makes the story even more tragic and heartwrenching.

Wow! This story was beautiful and very painful heartbreak... Gorgeous writing! But I think I will need a few days to breathe before I can continue with your sequels. At the moment I feel Elliot's pain a little too much for my liking... which is a compliment. :)

Wow. This was amazing. Great job.

I don't know how to begin...

First of all, thank you so much! This was so unique. I can't think of a fic where somethimg like this happened and there wasn't a happy ending.

Seriously I have no words for this. It was amazing! I'm still crying...hehe... There were some times in which I couldn't keep reading (I read out loud), just because.. it's too sad!

I can't imagine how people, unfortunate people, get to live this way. having someone so loved gone, and with no answers at all, without a body to call it death and memories, but a certainty that gives knowing what happened. but... Spend the rest of your like without knowing, looking, searching, without a grave, with a painful feeling that maybe a body is dumped somewhere. I think there is no worst way to live.

I'm glad you had the courage to end it the way you did. Certainly this is one of my favorites. Than you.

Adn congratulations! You are an excelent writter!
Naomi

P.S: Please forgive my english.
P.S.2: I'm surely going to read the other two endings, although I think I can figurate what they are.
*Because, sometimes, there are answers, too.*

What? WHAT? Are you serious? OMFG. Holy . . . I have to see.

Ek! Oh my goodness, that was wild. Now I am even more curious about the remaining chapters. *runs away to read*