*follows from link on LJ*

Hehe, I like it.

Favourite line:

[...] watching clothes spin around on their closed loop course, like the mindless grind of civilian life, no purpose but lather, rinse, drain, repeat. A pointless cycle he had every intention of remedying for the average joe. In perhaps a slightly less orthodox manner, but still, tough love meant not always getting the sugar to help the medicine shoved down your throat.

So much there 8o

Awesome stuff

I actually really love this. All that detail at the start about Moist felt so right. And Billy's motivation and thought process also seemed very real.

Great work.

This is really cute! The awkwardness played when Billy found out he had the wrong load was really funny, and I love the idea that henchmen live in sororities/fraternities :). Thanks for sharing this!