Wow. Wow.

I literally have no words.

This was not just amazing.

It was epic.

The mind games.

I felt like she was messing with my head.

Damn.

The characterizations and interactions were on point.

In a sense I could feel what Deidara was going through.

Like wow.

Amazing.

Sorry, I just don't know how elseI can describe the amazingness.

I wish you had more work.

I had to read this twice just to confirm how well-written it was.

Thank you for such an epic/mind-fuck fic.

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The story was amazing, everything about it was extraordinary, but the one single thing that ruined the story in its entirety for me was that it consisted incest. Incest is something that I largely oppose and cannot tolerate in any way, even in a fictional story/situation like this. Had it not been for the incest, I definitely would've liked/saved this story.

this was incredibly written and shit, i love it

Please please pleaseeee write more chapters for this!

Before I go on about how amazing a writer you are, let me tell you: WHY HAVENT YOU WRITTEN A HUNDRED STORIES FOR ALL THE TALENT YOU HAVE AS A WRITER WHYYYYYY

I want to read more from you. I swear.
Especially with the way you were able to make such a beautoful atmospehre and image in my head by telling story about two characters weakly presented in the manga! Boom! damn.

Im supposed to styudy for exams but im readingt his bootiful thing and i dont regret it
probably will later, when I look for bootiful deiino and find nothing but this and firefly's

What the heck did I just read? O.O But at the same time-it was honestly fascinating. I had to stop a few times to marvel at the way Ino played her little games, she's scary good and somehow scary in-character.

hahaha! Toootally epic lol

Perfectly twisted in a calm way.
Nice setting. Nice hotel.
Great build up.

I love you for making this story!

Woah.
I love how you portray Ino. She's not a ditzy blonde but she knows how to use it to her advantage. And she can manipulate so well it's scary. This is the Ino who works in T&I.

F*CKING AWESOME. This was incredible! I love your characterisations and interactions. The build-up felt very natural, and the naughty bits were fantastic. XD Incest is wincest, and I adore your writing style Visely. Off to go perv on your profile now.

that was insanely hot!

So sexy _.

I really enjoyed it, despite the dark content matter. Very interesting take on Deidara and Ino as a couple. It's sad that there aren't many could fics featuring them :(.

Thank you for the experience!

this was great! _ I totally enjoyed it

I love this story. The reasoning behind Ino's actions is delightfully twisted. I love the power she holds over Deidara, how she can so easily manipulate him. She uses his own artistic theories against him by applying them in a different situation to satisfy her own selfish desires.

The fact that you leave Deidara wanting more from Ino and leave the story open ended without any consequences resulting from their actions, you give the impression that Ino wins the mind game.

It's disturbing because it leaves you to pose the question: To what extent can social norms be deviated from? How far can you step over a line and honestly get away with it?

The issue of incest acted as the perfect line to draw in the sand.

You weren't afraid to push moral and social boundaries here...the "shock value" really drew me in.

The only other question I had at the end of this story:

Why is it the only one posted?

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