| Reviews for Heart And Sword |
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  rearue chapter 1 . 8/13/2013 neee this is pretty good :3 ya should continue dis - |
 wolfdragonful chapter 1 . 8/5/2011 Love this! Welcome to our world by the way, I have a tip: Flashbacks/memories/thoughts/dreams are sometimes put in italics to help distinguish. Anyway, can't wait to see where you take this! |
| Kuroshitsujilover138 chapter 1 . 11/23/2010 YOU MUST WRITE MORE! It has a realy intriging plot! |
| DEMONIC BLACKMAGIC chapter 1 . 10/10/2010 heehee lol i like this story so please update soon! |
| xopollyxo307 chapter 1 . 5/29/2010 PLEASE KEEP GOING! |
| Kaz-za-15 chapter 1 . 4/1/2010 Awesome first chapter. Cant wait for more. :) |
| chu chu banato chapter 1 . 2/16/2010 dang, you're good at fight scenes, details too. hope you update soon! :) |
| TigerTearz chapter 1 . 1/12/2010 Got my attention! Ha! Ichigo as the noob of nobs! Very interesting idea! looking forward to your next chapter and a bit of Grimmjow as well ;) /TT |
| Raicheru chapter 1 . 1/10/2010 This is really good. Nice setting and description. Of course, GrimmIchi is a favorite of mine. Can't wait until until they have a chance to get together. |
| BonneNuit chapter 1 . 1/10/2010 It is a bit confusing, but it's more because the time line is skewed as well as the readers are thrust into an AU that they know nothing about. Once it starts going though, it should be good. |
| Epoch95 chapter 1 . 1/9/2010 I really like how your story is going so far. PLEASE UPDATE SOON |
| KCameh chapter 1 . 1/9/2010 it is definitely worth continuing! Really! I'ts not confusing at all! My favorite part was the last one (of course) since I love the whole military idea! Very nice :) It's an original fanfic! I hope you'll continue to write it :3 |
| quixotomy chapter 1 . 1/9/2010 This is written well, the story and concept are interesting, and I like the way you've set it up. Everything looks good so far, apart from a few things - you've misused a few words: in the second paragraph you said Ichigo's ears were 'soar' when it should be spelled 'sore', and when the hollow is about to eat him you say its mouth opened 'impeccably' wide when it should be 'impossibly'. These words all have completely different meanings, and to avoid simple mistakes like this in the future I would suggest you get a beta reader or an editor to look over your work and make sure it's the best it possibly can be. But otherwise, I was pretty impressed. I like what you've done so far, and I hope you continue. Good luck with the writing. |
| siarafaerie-101-miss chapter 1 . 1/8/2010 really love it! I haven't seen a plot like this before so it's gonna be a rather unique fic! update again soon? ) |
| metal.lamp-silvertongue chapter 1 . 1/7/2010 Great way to start out, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter, so keep it up! |
