Ouch...that bad? Claw out my ears please.

I just want you to know that I was quite literally laughing out loud while reading this. Hilarious. 3

Haha very funny story I really liked it!

Hehehe "I want to stop thieving and be a Hobbit!"

MAn, I didn't know this wasn't finished!

"It gave him a feeling that he supposed would be similar to how he would feel if Gimli donned a swan-shaped doily as a hat and started proclaiming a love for Oliphaunts while trying to dance like a drunken Elf."

Oh, the absolute horror! Paralleled only by Eowyn's cooking. A lovely end to a hilarious story! : )

Great! I was in need of a good laugh! You should come up with some more, my favorite chapter was the robber one. Though part I was great. I loved that Arwen told Aragorn that he had a lovely singing voice! It made me laugh so hard.

Love and Peace!

Lauren

haha! you should definitely write more humor, this is awesome!

Galelac said, “I think I want to give up thieving and become a hobbit.”

Heck, who DOESN'T want to become a hobbit?

I didn't expect this to be updated, but I was delighted when I saw there were two more chapters to read! : D

I laughed copiously at this one. Very nice. : )

I like how no one even had to draw a weapon (except Gimli, and he didn't even use it), and the robbers just left of their own accord.

What a wacky group. Which ever group you care to apply that remark to, feel free. : )

hahhaaha as with the last chapter... oved it :)

hahahaha! Hilarious!

i was LOLing throughout this entire thing! your attempt at humor was a success! MY SISTER CAME AND ASKED WHAT WAS SO FUNNY... OH, sorry about the caps lock, that was an accident and i was too lazy to go back and retype it all. but i loved this a lot. XD

I loved the idea

I can definately imagine this happenning in my head and i still cant stop laughing!

Your first attempt at humor was wonderful!

I can imagine the whole story in my head. Your descriptions were very well done (and often very funny!).

Great job, keep on writing humor, because my stomach hurts from laughing!