WHOA! RAWR, EDWARD,RAWR!

ahhh. great story. hope you do more! bye!

The best Twilight one shot I've read on fanfiction

Loved it!

Whoa, that was hot!

i like it

Pretty intense! Loved it! Can you rewrite it from Edward's POV?

I love this story!

Write more of them please.

If this were to have happened in the books, this is exactly how I would have imagined it. To the T. It was freaking HOT, and beautifully written. For your first fanfic, this is incredible. Please keep writing, because you have serious talent there. That was seriously a freaking amazing story. You managed to capture Bella's personality (and even Edward's, but I mean Bella as the narrator) absolutely perfectly, and the narration made me feel as thouh I was in the books again, like it was a deleted scene of sorts. That was seriously a great, great story. Please write some more, PLEASE!

Very good!

WOW!

Very well written and descriptive. Nicely done. Loved the torture they went through and that it wasn't just about the sex. Keep em coming!

This story was well written i can honestly imagine that situation happening. Thanks for the story. It was amazing.

amazing, i just wish this had more reviews than it does.. people really should leave their comments on here.. love it, really. good job.

Ok I have to say, if Edward gave in at this moment during Twilight then I believe that is how it truly would have gone. You did such a great job describing that animalistic pull of his, and the desperation of Bella. All in all just wow, that was wonderfully done.