*strangled noises*

Nooooooo, it can't just stoooop! ;.;

I found this in my favourites from years ago and I’m glad I decided to reread all my old fave fics :,)

I know this fic is quite old now, but holy crap. This story took me for a fucking ride. I'm sad it's not finished, but thank you for at least letting us down at a good ending point. I wanted to say that you and your RP partner's styles flow together perfectly. It really doesn't read like an RP much at all. Anyway, I really enjoyed this, and this fic consumed my thoughts the entire time I spent reading it. It did have the side effect of ruining Keef for me, but eh, worth it. Thanks so much for writing and posting.

I like it. They're pretty much in character and I'm interested to read the rest.
((is this gonna make me cry? I'm a little scared since I already read sad things and cried today))

I really enjoyed this story! I hope you continue it someday. Still, I enjoyed what was written. Thanks for writing this!

This fic just... omg it's so amazing. You guys stay so in character, the plot is entertaining and it's held my undivided attention (I may have marathoned this over the last two days... .), and it is written beautifully... not to mention the hot alien sex. ;P It's just.. wow, yeah anyway I'm really excited to see what happens next, and I'm glad you're considering continuing it, even with the unfortunate circumstance of having to go at it alone. I hope to see more, and I'm eager to check out some of your other stuff. Thank you for sharing! :)

Just finished reading and ooooh this is -delicious-! The twists, the complications, the -feels-! Oh I do hope you continue this someday, it's wonderful reading

It's absolutely fantastic! Please countinue!

I am absolutely enamored with your story. The plot, characterizations, and potential all have me clicking refresh to see if there's been another update. Thank you for sharing and please continue!

Dang more traveling.. These guys need a radio like real time. I can already hear Dib like 'is it too late now to say soooorry' XD
Im slightly annoyed at how stupid Zim is towards affection and love and all that, because I feel like he should get a little credit and not constantly be this childish. A hint of maturity in Zim is always good because it's unexpected from his character. But i wouldnt worry too much about OOC issues, because ZaDr has to be a little out of character to work anyway. That's the main criticism i have on this story though. It just gets frustrating to see Zim react the same way every time with very little signs of growth or change as a character. Other than that i think you're writing is excellent, you're very creative with it all, and you do awesome with the characters the majority of the time! I really hope you'll see this story through!

Dib's just an old softy with Zim. I love it. Hopefully Zim figures out his 'weakness' soon..

Zim is such an asshole. Like it's just getting to the point where I think Dib just needs to get out while he can...
You definitely did well with keeping all of us on edge. They almost died but didn't...and Dib feels like the whole thing is on him with Zim being an ass and what not. It's cool that you're not just feeding readers what they want to see but dang... It does keep things interesting though. Nice work!

I like how you ended this chapter, and i thought you did really well with Zim's 'confession' and his attempt at a kiss. Overrall a great chapter but overrall a sex chapter so not much to judge haha. I loved the last chapter too though, specifically how Dib and Zim came about as close as it gets go admitting the their feelings. You know the characters so well. You're also excellent with timing. I feel like y'all know when we're all about to burst and then it happens when we dont expect it.

If I were Dib I'd be completely exhausted with Zim. I am now. I love it when writers dont rush into the romance but i'm like clawing my bedsheets right now. That aside i do love how you addressed keef and his weird ass origins... Not at all how i thought this would go but i'm liking it. I'm also waiting to see where the DADR fits into this. Not that i'm looking forward to it, it rubs me entirely the wrong way. Such a long ride to ZADR but i'm really looking forward to it more and more through each chapter!