Continue and update jake human features began athrophy and wanish and he become full na'vi complete with four fingers on limbs.

loved it. :D

"Let us hope he takes after his mother in all else. I shall not have my daughter's son be a fool."

I love that line! But anyways, well written.

Interesting one-shot. I like it.

love it

shay

Nice and short, but it's got places to go if you ever want to come back to it. Good job.

Very sweet.

Cute story! Short and sweet. I'm loving these little drabbles people are putting out over Jake and Neytiris relationship post-Avatar. I liked how the Ometicaya people didn't one hundred percent accept him right away. Had him 'work' for it. After all he was partially responsible for 'hundreds' of deaths. All in all it's a good write. Keep it going!

Cheers!

you should continue it was amazing )

i like it you should continue

You must be in my head! As soon as I came out of the theater, I started talking with my friends about the problems they had conceiving because Jake probebly had a different number of chromosomes. Really well written I love it :)

I really enjoyed this. I would love to read more chapters on Neytiri and Jake.

This is the kind of story that should have been expanded into a full-length, multi-chapter drama! There's so much interesting angst here that you only briefly pass over.

Poor Jake, mother-in-laws are harsh.

You might get more reviews if you correct the grammar in your summary. You obviously can write well, so I'm assuming it's just a typo. But it looks like it's written by someone who doesn't speak very good English. I almost passed over this story myself and only opened it because I was bored. But it's worth reading! So fix the summary!