Reviews for Love Story
CallaRose4ever chapter 23 . 4/16
I Loved this story it was so sweet. once again thank you for sharing it I even added it to my favorites. thanks
crystal.hainline chapter 23 . 8/29/2019
This was sooooo good!
KayDV chapter 23 . 5/7/2019
Thank you for writing such a lovely story
bunnyobelenus chapter 12 . 11/20/2018
I know this was a rather serious chapter but the last couple of sections had me in hysterics.
Immortal Dragon Empress chapter 23 . 6/26/2018
I don’t usually read Hermione/Viktor pairings but I liked what your summary was offering and I am really glad I gave your story a chance. It was very well written- though if I may offer some advice, try not to add your authors note in between your writing as this disturbs the flow the of the story. Rather wait till the end. The pairings and relationships in this story were rather different for me and I thought that would chase me away but you developed the story and your characters so well that I was truly invested in it. I do wish that we got more Viktor/Hermione interaction. As the story progressed it felt like that element was getting lost. I also wish you had written more on the final battle and the epilogue. It just felt like it was lacking all the important details. After all this was what they had been preparing nearly all of their lives for. I really did like the humor you invoked in your characters and the muggle references! Though I did find it a bit ... silly (?), the long stream of men that had fallen in love with Hermione and she simply had no idea ? I mean she is supposed to be the smartest witch of the century. Once agin though it was a good read and I can’t wait to read what you’ve got next!
Guest chapter 23 . 9/3/2017
Overall a good story - but I am sad that the George portion of the story wasn't really addressed
flaasil chapter 23 . 8/8/2017
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Guest chapter 23 . 7/23/2017
Awesome story!
KyloRen'sgirl213 chapter 1 . 6/24/2017
Loving this story
Guest chapter 22 . 5/5/2017
Green and silver not green and black are the Slytherin colours just 2 let you know... good story so far ...
Guest chapter 14 . 3/28/2017
If there's some prophesy and if Ginny has seer-dreams then why didn't anyone grow a brain and warn Hermione and Harry so they could, I dunno, PROTECT THEIR FAMILIES? Too common sense?
Guest chapter 13 . 3/28/2017
That was weird. Viktor's parents could have easily "adopted" Hermione. I hope Hermione gives Molly and Arthur a very cold shoulder from then onward for abandoning her.
Guest chapter 12 . 3/28/2017
I don't understand - if "the boys" want to go fight with the YOUNGER girls, why not let them? Are "the boys" fragile?
Fullofpassion09 chapter 13 . 12/13/2016
They don't have he money or time to take in both of them yet they raised 7 kids on the same salary and 3 of the 7 are out of the house supporting themselves at this point... ugh I have so many issues with that family.
MWolfe13 chapter 23 . 11/11/2016
Very out of character story, but I loved it! Disappointed that we didn't get a chapter where Hermione meets up with George, but I'll live. Why did Molly disown Ginny? What happened to Ron in the end? Great job though! I love finding completed stories for crack pairings
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