Great story!

That was a beautiful story! I loved the whole idea, the mystery and the tension of it. It was great how everybody was perfectly in character, completely believable. I'm so glad you included Bobby and Ellen in your story, both behaving sort of like parents to the boys. Good job!

Do you mean champaign, Illinois?

I really enjoyed this story! Very unique suspenseful storyline. :)

Loving the story thus far as I've read, but had to stop to comment on this chapter due to the Styx shout out! I love Styx, and Renegade was the song that got me into the band in the first place. Awesomeness :D

I loved it DD That was amazing DD

I can't resist sick Dean eheheh He's just... I don't know! eehhehe

Really, great story ~

Rosetta

Okay, here it is. My first review ever. But I have to make it. :)

I love your fic. It has enough Dean whumpage in it and the soul eater story is really great! It's so complex. Respect for your mind (and you) to come to such a story.

I would like to read more of this.

Aw, well done! A terrific case story, with excellent hurt!Dean, protective!Sam, and Jo, Ellen, and Bobby were all pitch perfect.

Wow. Just - wow.

You were recc'd over at hoodie_time on LJ - and thank God or else I would've probably missed it.

Oh my fucking God, respiratorily sick!Dean - my very favorite. And you did it so well. And then you gave us a great case fic - I suck at that part of writing but you did fantastic! : )

You're a wonderful writer - awesome detail and great balance of sick Dean and awesome Sam, plus all the other details. I don't know what else to say. You've got it all going on in your writing - so keep it up with your next story. : )

Thank you so much for taking the time to write this. . .

I really liked this story and am truly sad that it is done

nice ending to your first story here on FF...look forward to your next one?

AW that was an awesome story! Your a very talented writer...I'm going to have to read more of your works.

That was AWESOME!I love the story,the characters you brought in and the one!

Enjoyed this story very much. Good mystery, strong Sam, helpful Ellen and Jo- and Bobby- and a good amount of whumped Dean. A very good recipe. Still can't believe this is your first story but I do hope you have another one coming up soon. Thank You.

This was such a terrific story. I could so see it being an actual episode. Stunning job with the writing, I really enjoyed reading it. :)