this is great, a very thoughtful look into Mamoru in the manga.

MORE MORE MORE

Its really good!

Correction: You got VERY pretty with words. (: I like it a lot; the use of "effulgent" in the first sentence hooked me, haha.

Good good post. Thanks for putting up.

Wow. :p That was sweet, and in a cavity-provoking way. I swear I must have gotten a hole in my tooth just by reading this (uh oh... my dentist aint gonna like that...SHH!) Great job! :p Continue with your fabulous work! (And stick to this form of writing. I know this might be a debut and all since I read the A/M, but it really does sound great in this story. :p This type of writing could go a long way for you!)

Great job! I loved the way you did this; very well done. :)